The Mockingbirds Be Damned

They did mock us ...did they not?...the mockingbirds?
I say they did!...innuendo infuse...as pellucid as she...they mocked us!
...gossiped luridly about us in luscious low tones like the old hen in her 
folding chair...nothing better to do than judge in ripples to her cluck...her menagerie...in their horribly ugly dough smeared aprons...their blue heads tilted in close at twilight...their murmurings...wet currants of milky weighted ancestral opinion...like the too sweet fragrant frangipani of yesterday's casket bouquets. 
They are the last vermillion crest of an ending era...the harsh setting sun 
of discrimination's descent ...now blurs to a color rich flag and nation...The Mockingbirds ...be damned!




For 10 words 10 lines contest
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Roper Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Great job arrange the 10 words, congratulations on your win, Ingrid. Hugs Eve ~`*
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Hi Eve, nice to see your name again! Thank you...I am off to read yours :)
Inman Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:33 AM
Intense write with beautiful imagery Ingrid.
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Thank you James!
Ashley Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:28 PM
A unique and wonderful socially conscious poem. Impressive, enthralling and beautifully expressed Ingrid. Congratulations on your lovely win with your amazing write. ~Susan
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Susan! you made my day! Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Congrats on your placement, Ingrid. For older children, right?
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:10 AM
Hello Line Hopefully all children will learn acceptance and love for others :)
Y. Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:55 PM
This one was very different to the other entries.. well written Ingrid... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Aww you are kind Silent! Thank you. The winning poem was truly stunning! Well chosen :) Sending all good to you Ingrid
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