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The mist washes the hills In a hazy comfort, Soothing away every thought Releasing the promises Worthiness, like the dewdrop Silencing fears, tears The mist, like a heavy fog, Caressing oak and pine Stardust falls, pouring out Rhymes, rhythms Poetry on the emotional Ride through eventide The mist rinses the peaks Destroying darkness Erasing the mysterious Coloring creation Blinding the elation Whispering intimacy, joy The mist, reminds me Like a vapor, my life is passing by me Rich in blessings, fading From the seas of enchantment Relieving me of doubt Promising that I will always bloom The mist baths the mountains In shadows of dignity Faded reasons for faith in dreams Promising wisdom, peace Cleverly hidden beneath the gray Steam that shrouds faith The mist, alive like the wind Dancing in the spirit Whimsical, wishful, wistful Praising a God who is alive Singing through the spray of love Poured out on all flesh… From His breath, His gasp Exhaling blessings On the ones He accepts Through salvation Saving grace that admits Jesus saves completely! July 14, 2022

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Date: 8/2/2022 11:53:00 AM
That's a great write Gina. Very nicely penned,
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Date: 7/24/2022 8:09:00 AM
wow, an amazing first place trophy, Regina. Big congratulations to you.
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Date: 7/24/2022 4:11:00 AM
Gina, I think this poem shows another side of your depth. Lines like “ Faded reasons for faith in dreams” The mist, alive like the wind Dancing in the spirit” lifted me to a sacred place in the shadows of the mist. I see why this amazing poem won the Trophy Gina. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2022 8:46:00 PM
"Like a vapor, my life is passing by me", "Whimsical, wishful, wistful" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/22/2022 8:00:00 PM
"The mist, reminds me Like a vapor, my life is passing by me Rich in blessings, fading From the seas of enchantment Relieving me of doubt Promising that I will always bloom" Love this stanza ! Lovely write, deserving your trophy win! Congratulations Gina !
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Date: 7/22/2022 6:38:00 PM
The mist is the welcoming harbinger, Gina, wondrous depiction you've outlined my friend, cheers to your winning trophy piece, Aloha~William
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Date: 7/22/2022 4:35:00 PM
Dear Gina, absolutely breathtaking poetry and praise! Amazing beauty spills from your golden pen. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/22/2022 12:24:00 PM
I'm writing to congratulate you on winning the contest. With this poetry, which was predicted and anticipated, you deserve it.
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Date: 7/14/2022 3:56:00 AM
Gina, Such excellent poetry is undoubtedly the work of a beautiful spirit, my friend. From the start to the final phrase, your words of wisdom are brilliant. Blessings
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