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The Mirror of Sand

I combed through the sand mirrors, 
removing them all.
Wildland was centered on a horde of foes.
I appeared on the seashore, 
as a result of a tsunami.
From the ramifications of a waterway.
I've been looking forward to the coming days.
You were also the most skilled craftsman.
I walked across the breeze, 
scaffolding to the apex.
The length of his lashes had an impact on him.
I've wished for days that would never come.
As a painter, you were unbeatable
Looking up, I was able to, 
overcome the breeze connection.
He shortened his lashes, 
to the length of a chestnut's.
What are you hoping to achieve? 
You're extinguishing your vigor.


Written: August 24, 2021

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Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/25/2021 1:55:00 AM Great imagery in this original poem. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/25/2021 3:58:00 AM Thank you so much dear, Victor, I always rely on your comment, because I know how powerful is your poetry skills. God bless you my friend.

David Kavanagh Date: 8/24/2021 2:46:00 PM Beautiful and unique Lasaad, the lashes accentuated by the photo, you offer a feast of imagery to the reader, ramifications of a waterway so much meaning here, No extinguishing your vigor for poetry none at all, cheers David Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/24/2021 4:18:00 PM Thank you so much for the supportive compliments and thorough study of my poem David. Only well-read, approbative people are clever enough to decipher some of the elements of this poem. Still, you've shown that you have a great deal of character intelligence and plauditory, and I respect you so much for that.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/24/2021 11:15:00 AM Powerful and challenging writing that leaves its impressive mark on the reader, dear friend, Lasaad! Blessings! Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 8/24/2021 4:23:00 PM Thank you so much for the generous compliments and thorough study of my poem, dear friend, Demetrios. Your comment shed more enchantment on my poem. Your well-read, approbative manner as a great poet helps to decipher some of the elements of this poem. Thanks for your generosity.