The Mirror of Sand

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I combed through the sand mirrors, removing them all. Wildland was centered on a horde of foes. I appeared on the seashore, as a result of a tsunami. From the ramifications of a waterway. I've been looking forward to the coming days. You were also the most skilled craftsman. I walked across the breeze, scaffolding to the apex. The length of his lashes had an impact on him. I've wished for days that would never come. As a painter, you were unbeatable Looking up, I was able to, overcome the breeze connection. He shortened his lashes, to the length of a chestnut's. What are you hoping to achieve? You're extinguishing your vigor. Written: August 24, 2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/25/2021 1:55:00 AM

Great imagery in this original poem.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/25/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, Victor, I always rely on your comment, because I know how powerful is your poetry skills. God bless you my friend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/24/2021 2:46:00 PM

Beautiful and unique Lasaad, the lashes accentuated by the photo, you offer a feast of imagery to the reader, ramifications of a waterway so much meaning here, No extinguishing your vigor for poetry none at all, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/24/2021 4:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for the supportive compliments and thorough study of my poem David. Only well-read, approbative people are clever enough to decipher some of the elements of this poem. Still, you've shown that you have a great deal of character intelligence and plauditory, and I respect you so much for that.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2021 11:15:00 AM

Powerful and challenging writing that leaves its impressive mark on the reader, dear friend, Lasaad! Blessings!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/24/2021 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for the generous compliments and thorough study of my poem, dear friend, Demetrios. Your comment shed more enchantment on my poem. Your well-read, approbative manner as a great poet helps to decipher some of the elements of this poem. Thanks for your generosity.