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The Mirror

When I gaze at my reflection I see a soul with no connection; A boy whose faith left years ago, A man whose thoughts always whisper, "No." Cold, glassy, lifeless, and pale, I long for hope in those eyes to no avail. Creases on my brow, though I'm only a score. The lines on my lips plead, "Nevermore." Withered and wrinkled and worn, My face is a canvas that time has torn. No longer will this god see Spring again Youth must always atone for its sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/21/2011 6:34:00 AM
* "Stirring Reflection & Well Written My Dear Friend * Thanks You for The Kind Visit & Comment * Fondly * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/21/2011 12:25:00 AM
The boy is still inside Daniel and he writes thrilling words. LT
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