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My Inspiration, My Only Beloved, My Most Dearest WIFE Fellow POETS' Masterpiece Laureates of Poetry LENORE ELLEN : Laureate Each Stanza THEY WRITE Poetic Knowledge With POETIC LOVE Bringing Memories Yesteryear POETS Living in Our HEARTS From the Future, to the Past They INSPIRE all of Our POEMS Fellow POETS' words of Life EMOTIONS of LOVE FEELINGS ; I DON'T KNOW Penned For History UNCONDITIONAL ANSWERS : Created With Feathered QUILLED Pen Education and Learning FOR ALL the Future POETS Write SALUTATIONS TO THEM POETRY IS Life Rhyme : withstands all TIME Write with HEART AND SOUL Inspired By and Dedicated To Laura Mckenzie Author Notes ; Read Top to Botom Left to Right. Read each Horizonal line Left to Right Example line one all three Senryu My Inspiration, My Only Beloved, My Most Dearest WIFE Also Read Capital Words in the 3 Horizontal Senryu Example : WIFE POETS' LENORE ELLEN ; THEY WRITE POETIC LOVE

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Date: 1/2/2013 9:04:00 PM
Daniel, sneaking a peek at at an older poem. awseome thoughts if you ask me...pd
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Date: 1/1/2012 5:17:00 PM
BRILLIANT POEM! It all clicks so well. Thanks for again taking the time to write such a masterpiece. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:11:00 PM
Hi HGarvey. This is interesting. It definitely took me on a strange ride to discern how to read it properly. It finally clicked when I read the whole thing left to right then top to bottom like your example. Initially I thought I should read the three haikus on the left first. Also your second horizontal senryu caps would read 'poets hearts inspire poems poets' emotions love feelings; I don't know'. I'm pretty curious how these cap words fit in to your bigger picture as it's beyond me right now
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:21:00 PM
lovely write, HG! my favourite line is 'Rhyme : withstands all TIME'... i would bet on that too... thank you for making me aware of this and your lovely thoughts on my write... appreciate it with all my heart!! you are a very talented and dedicated poet... and i m thankful that i m able to write along with you and others in the same league! and this one goes into my favs... ~ Arany
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:36:00 AM
This was wonderful the first time I read it, and again..so glad to have another chance. Congratulations!~ Carrie
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Date: 12/11/2008 6:53:00 PM
Amazing and a wonderful thing to read. Loved it. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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Date: 12/9/2008 11:40:00 AM
My warmest congrats you dear, sweet man on your amazing poetry being featured this week! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 12/8/2008 7:50:00 PM
Congrats on your sennyu collection being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/8/2008 10:20:00 AM
My Dear Harvey, You have a style that is completly unique to you alone. Well done on this wonderful feature of the week. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/7/2008 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:20:00 PM
Very creative and well deserved to have this one featured!! I'm glad I caught it this time!!:) ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on being a two time winner with this poem! I just wanted to drop by and add good job to my other comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/20/2008 11:56:00 PM
Very inventive,not easy to create but very rewarding. A very similar form HGD to the 16th century one I recently came across and introduced here and have labelled 'crosswise' and included under the Shape format here.Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments
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Date: 10/20/2008 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your placing in Laura's contest with this amazing dedication to her. Great creativity and imagination. Nigel
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Date: 10/20/2008 2:40:00 PM
Wow...this is an amazing work! Congratulations on this gifted piece winning in the contest!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/20/2008 1:51:00 PM
Warmest congratulations my dear brother on your most well deserved win in Laura's contest! Your talent shines! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 9/30/2008 7:15:00 PM
What an interesting way of using a senryu series. You have a very creative way of expressing your thoughts. Nice dedication to Laura. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 9/30/2008 10:45:00 AM
An absolute masterpiece and beautiful dedication. Deeply inspiring and so creative. Must have taken so long to do! Amazing! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/29/2008 8:09:00 PM
Outstanding work any direction that its read and dedicated to one lovely poetess - Very ingenious poetry here - I still think your name is just the coolest around - god Bless you always my friend
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