Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Senryu

The Mirage You See Is Poetry

My Inspiration,                         My Only Beloved,                     My Most Dearest WIFE  
Fellow POETS' Masterpiece         Laureates of Poetry                  LENORE ELLEN : Laureate
Each Stanza THEY WRITE          Poetic Knowledge                     With  POETIC LOVE

Bringing Memories                  Yesteryear POETS                      Living in Our HEARTS
From the Future, to the Past   They INSPIRE all of Our POEMS    Fellow POETS' words of Life
EMOTIONS of LOVE                FEELINGS ; I DON'T KNOW           Penned For History

UNCONDITIONAL                   ANSWERS : Created                  With Feathered QUILLED Pen
Education and Learning           FOR ALL the Future POETS        Write SALUTATIONS TO THEM
POETRY IS Life                       Rhyme : withstands all TIME     Write with HEART AND SOUL

Inspired By and Dedicated To Laura Mckenzie      Author Notes ; Read Top to Botom Left to
Right. Read each Horizonal line Left to Right  Example line one all three Senryu 
My Inspiration, My Only Beloved, My Most Dearest WIFE Also Read Capital Words in the 3 
Horizontal Senryu Example : WIFE POETS' LENORE ELLEN ; THEY WRITE POETIC LOVE

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Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2013 at 9:04 PM Daniel, sneaking a peek at at an older poem. awseome thoughts if you ask me...pd

Laura Breidenthal January 1, 2012 at 5:17 PM BRILLIANT POEM! It all clicks so well. Thanks for again taking the time to write such a masterpiece. Always, Laura

Yoni Dvorkis March 19, 2009 at 1:11 PM Hi HGarvey. This is interesting. It definitely took me on a strange ride to discern how to read it properly. It finally clicked when I read the whole thing left to right then top to bottom like your example. Initially I thought I should read the three haikus on the left first. Also your second horizontal senryu caps would read 'poets hearts inspire poems poets' emotions love feelings; I don't know'. I'm pretty curious how these cap words fit in to your bigger picture as it's beyond me right now

Arany P. March 14, 2009 at 10:21 PM lovely write, HG! my favourite line is 'Rhyme : withstands all TIME'... i would bet on that too... thank you for making me aware of this and your lovely thoughts on my write... appreciate it with all my heart!! you are a very talented and dedicated poet... and i m thankful that i m able to write along with you and others in the same league! and this one goes into my favs... ~ Arany

Carrie Richards December 14, 2008 at 11:36 AM This was wonderful the first time I read it, and again..so glad to have another chance. Congratulations!~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera December 11, 2008 at 6:53 PM Amazing and a wonderful thing to read. Loved it. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

Sharon Winter December 9, 2008 at 11:40 AM My warmest congrats you dear, sweet man on your amazing poetry being featured this week! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Vince Suzadail Jr. December 8, 2008 at 7:50 PM Congrats on your sennyu collection being featured. God Bless. Vince

Elaine George December 8, 2008 at 10:20 AM My Dear Harvey, You have a style that is completly unique to you alone. Well done on this wonderful feature of the week. Love, Lainie

John Heck December 7, 2008 at 5:15 PM Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Carrie Richards December 7, 2008 at 3:20 PM Very creative and well deserved to have this one featured!! I'm glad I caught it this time!!:) ~ Carrie

December 7, 2008 at 2:13 PM Congratulations on being a two time winner with this poem! I just wanted to drop by and add good job to my other comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand November 20, 2008 at 11:56 PM Very inventive,not easy to create but very rewarding. A very similar form HGD to the 16th century one I recently came across and introduced here and have labelled 'crosswise' and included under the Shape format here.Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments

Nigel Fawcett October 20, 2008 at 11:28 PM Congratulations on your placing in Laura's contest with this amazing dedication to her. Great creativity and imagination. Nigel

Carrie Richards October 20, 2008 at 2:40 PM Wow...this is an amazing work! Congratulations on this gifted piece winning in the contest!! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter October 20, 2008 at 1:51 PM Warmest congratulations my dear brother on your most well deserved win in Laura's contest! Your talent shines! Love, Shar xoxo

September 30, 2008 at 7:15 PM What an interesting way of using a senryu series. You have a very creative way of expressing your thoughts. Nice dedication to Laura. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Blessings to you. Karen

Sharon Winter September 30, 2008 at 10:45 AM An absolute masterpiece and beautiful dedication. Deeply inspiring and so creative. Must have taken so long to do! Amazing! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan September 29, 2008 at 8:09 PM Outstanding work any direction that its read and dedicated to one lovely poetess - Very ingenious poetry here - I still think your name is just the coolest around - god Bless you always my friend