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PLEASE SEE THE HUMOUR I SEE

I am not selling life insurance per say,

just selling Life Insurance per read.

I a'muse zing myself endlessly...

;)

The Miracle of Life

So I wrote a poem
About the miracle of life
And posted it quite proudly
However naming it
Life Insurance
I fear the soup finds dowdy

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Aniruddha Pathak

March 22, 2017 at 8:41 AM

I liked the underlying, subtle humour. And thank you for reading my poem.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 22, 2017 at 10:19 AM

Thanks Aniruddha! (I hope it did lead you to read Life Insurance, truly a much better poem ;) Bless! xomo

Mike Hauser

March 18, 2017 at 9:44 AM

Nice!

Running Wolves

March 15, 2017 at 10:55 PM

Who cares what others think. Just write for your own pleasure... I do... I mean don't get me wrong I'd prefer that others like what I write, but I'm not gonna lose sleep if they don't. Cause some will, some won't, so what. ....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 15, 2017 at 11:21 PM

;) I just amused myself after all, and wanted said poem to get read, despite it's unfortunate title which I love and still find too fitting to change...the kindness flowing my way is lovely and appreciated, I just hope the humour is translated xomo Ty Robert!

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 2:41 PM

Do not worry my dear Maureen! Listen to your muse and let your feelings flood the pages many will appreciate your writing, not all, but many me included! Keep it up!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 15, 2017 at 3:34 PM

Oh thank you dear! It was really more of a musing, that "Life Insurance" is about as dry a topic for poetry one could imagine ;) that said, you are a beautiful oasis my friend xomo

Lin Lane

March 15, 2017 at 1:37 PM

We write because we have something to say, even if others don't appreciate it. Listen to Charlie...a wise man.

Charlie Smith

March 15, 2017 at 12:04 PM

I read it and loved it. guess that makes me un-dowdy...Don't let anything keep you from speaking from your heart, Thanks for sharing your thoughts Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 15, 2017 at 12:34 PM

Thanks Charlie! It occurred to me that anything coming to my own mailbox mentioning life insurance is promptly discarded ;) you are a darling xomo

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