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The Miracle of Life

So I wrote a poem About the miracle of life And posted it quite proudly However naming it Life Insurance I fear the soup finds dowdy

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Date: 3/22/2017 8:41:00 AM
I liked the underlying, subtle humour. And thank you for reading my poem.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 3/22/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Aniruddha! (I hope it did lead you to read Life Insurance, truly a much better poem ;) Bless! xomo
Date: 3/18/2017 9:44:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 3/15/2017 10:55:00 PM
Who cares what others think. Just write for your own pleasure... I do... I mean don't get me wrong I'd prefer that others like what I write, but I'm not gonna lose sleep if they don't. Cause some will, some won't, so what. ....
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 3/15/2017 11:21:00 PM
;) I just amused myself after all, and wanted said poem to get read, despite it's unfortunate title which I love and still find too fitting to change...the kindness flowing my way is lovely and appreciated, I just hope the humour is translated xomo Ty Robert!
Date: 3/15/2017 2:41:00 PM
Do not worry my dear Maureen! Listen to your muse and let your feelings flood the pages many will appreciate your writing, not all, but many me included! Keep it up!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 3/15/2017 3:34:00 PM
Oh thank you dear! It was really more of a musing, that "Life Insurance" is about as dry a topic for poetry one could imagine ;) that said, you are a beautiful oasis my friend xomo
Date: 3/15/2017 1:37:00 PM
We write because we have something to say, even if others don't appreciate it. Listen to Charlie...a wise man.
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:04:00 PM
I read it and loved it. guess that makes me un-dowdy...Don't let anything keep you from speaking from your heart, Thanks for sharing your thoughts Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 3/15/2017 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Charlie! It occurred to me that anything coming to my own mailbox mentioning life insurance is promptly discarded ;) you are a darling xomo