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This poem is a work of fiction and not taken from personal experience.

The Mind of a Madman

This is done in the Rubaiyat style.


The mind of a madman


Lurking deep within my mind,
Are demons, sometimes hard to find,
They go by many names,
And they come out to visit from time to time.

The demons are angry with me,
Transformed me into what you see,
Their names are Anger and Rage,
They haunt me deeply.

These two emotional fiends,
Make me seem awful and mean,
That’s not me!
It’s these two, they go unseen.

Anger and Rage are brothers; Twins,
They have hideous faces, evil grins,
They fight with each other, all day,
I am always the villain; I can’t win.

God put me in this room,
A nice little padded tomb,
They make me bang my head against the wall,
” God, birth me from this horrid womb.”

These people come at night,
You know, the ones in white,
They stick me with needles,
They have to tie me down, the demons hate the light.

Anger and Rage did a bad thing; awful.
One day, they started to rumble,
Things got way out of control,
Cain killed Abel.

Now, they think I’m a danger.
Justice is what they hunger,
For the bad things these demons did.
Why can’t they understand my horror?

I want to end this pain,
It is time for me to kill Cain,
But the people in white won’t let me!
They just call me insane.



Written By: Samual Ronthorpe
© 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Badounts Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:58 PM
You are not insane. You are insanely good poem, love your wave of emotions and personification of the emotions making them personal and separate beings. great mind indeed
Perry Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Wow
M V Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Thank you for your comments on my poem,Samual.Your poem is well crafted one.It is thought provoking.Lovingly,Fabiyas
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:30 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Samual. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Chilling Poem, Samual, but excellent to read, really enjoyed this. harry
D'Rhymez Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 3:29 AM
Awesome!
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 12:56 AM
i haven't done a rubaiyat for a long while, samual, and this enthralling piece gives much inspiration to revisit this form...a fine, eerie write with such depth and poetic artistry.. beautiful!.. :) huggs!
Goller Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 4:57 PM
I have never read a Rubaiyet style poem, its rather dark expressed story poem, well written, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Erich
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:13 PM
We all have our 'demons' it is how we chose to deals with them which shows our true character! nice one! [Ahhh a purist LOL..yes like all of us can't write unless there's a contest..I always dislike being asked what contest is this for!] ps being emotional has to have some positive value aye? ;) re the comment on my write. Light & Love
Phookan Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 1:44 PM
This is an outstanding piece on a theme like this.. and rubaiyat seems to be one of the toughest forms, because of its narrative length and all. You did amazingly well here.. re: chestnut tree, thanks for your kind remarks, glad you liked it. Best wishes, gautami
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February 21, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Wow, excellent, Samual. I am not familiar with this form, but that didn't matter. Anger and rage get us into a lot of trouble. The verse about the demons coming at night to stick you with needles is especially powerful. You're going on my favorite poets' list too. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:29 AM
I agree with Rhonda...this would be ideal to enter in the Jeckyl /Hyde contest! such power of emotion! Wow!
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:31 AM
And ps.....Samual....I saw your comment on one of my poems, and if I can be of any help, please let me know. (Hope you are not considering leaving the Soup)! You have always been most kind to me and my efforts to write...I have noticed each one, and appreciate more than you might know! Thank you very much as always...Carrie
Agtani Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:07 AM
Samual I see a schizophrenic personality in this interesting piece of yours. Nicely written. Your work leads me to read rubaiyat form. Hey thanks for reading my work. Dalila
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February 20, 2012 at 11:12 PM
This would be great for the Jeckyl and Hyde contest. I think I remember reading you don't enter them much, but this would be a winner, I'm sure. I really enjoyed the form (which I have never read before) and the content. Thanks for reading my poems and giving such wonderful feedback. You have been very encouraging. Blessings, Rhonda
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 10:50 PM
This is the first example of a rubaiyat poem I have ever seen on the soup. You have expressed yourself quite well with this style.
Scholtz Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Brilliant poem samual, love it, best wishes, love Elizabeth
Sentes Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Are you kidding me????? This is insanely stunning pal! Wow! I think I am provoked to write a poem on insanity, too. Thanks for inspiring and for your uplifting comment on my poem In My Nightmare I wore a Wedding Gown. I am overwhelmed! But hey you're such a fantastic poet yourself! keep writing. I am gonna watch for you. =)
Turnure Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:27 PM
I rather enjoyed this, I hope that don't say much about my personality! hehe Thanks for the kind words on my poetry! :) ~Amanda~
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:25 PM
good portrayal of an insane person, Sam. I found this very interesting to read.
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:52 PM
very bloody goood ol mate, sidestep dem white coats, spring on ya skates, flash off into the night, love your poem a great delight, look out it's bloody cain:) orright...
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Creative way to write about these two human emtional that uncontrolled cause all kinds of problems..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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