The Mind-To-Mind Link

She stood there, by the roadside; eyes of obsidian, framed in wispy lashes. I was certain that she’d run onto the crowded interstate. The closer that I got, the more intense, my neck muscles, grew. In my mind, I visualized her, leaping back into the woods. I prepared to pull over, but no one else was doing that for a deer, I felt; at any rate, I would not be dining on road kill tonight and I hoped that, no one else would. Go back into the woods, baby; over and over I thought and visualized her graceful rebound. I drew closer, prepared to pull of onto the gravel; I would not let her beauty be spoiled. Tension turning neck and shoulders steeled, I chanted my mantra…”go back…go back, baby”,.. Her soft, brown head turned, to look at me; an instant glance, confirmed that she’d received my message; as she bounded back to the safety of her wood. The focused mind, can work small miracles; More than one life, was spared, that day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/20/2015 3:15:00 PM
Nicely written M.L. The link worked... Verlena
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/20/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much...my sister used to get so upset when a deer was near the interstate; she have a steel grip on the wheel and gripe, sa if the deer planned to walk out in front of her; I began doing that while riding with her, years ago and I just keep it going...a little prayer doesn't hurt, either.
Date: 1/19/2015 2:41:00 PM
Subconscious to super conscious. Very nice. I enjoyed it...Best wishes to you...
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/20/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Sandip; it's taken from a real experience.
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