The Milkman

He came sharp at 6 a.m, he was our old milkman
My mother woke up to bring it in
She would sometimes meet him
Today was one such day
She greeted him, but he said nothing 
and went on his way.

She found that odd, but put it down to
Him having not heard.
The doorbell rang around seven
It was the Milkman’s son
Who came to say his father had passed away.

My mother was in shock
The milkman had died at four a.m
She narrated the story to his son
She ran to the kitchen to see
The milk bottles were empty.


01.10.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ermine Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 3:02 PM
I'm tingling!... Very odd scenario, oh gee! Great entry, Carol. Well described. Congratulations on its Win today!!
Mitra Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Thanks Sigrid...unexplained things do happen....and I grew up hearing this from my mum time and again...It's as if she kept repeating it to believe it herself.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:23 PM
I can even believe it! so well written! Congrats on your win!
Mitra Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:20 PM
Thanks Krish....much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:06 AM
- Your poem gave me goosebumps, Carol :) - Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:19 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise... much love.
Devonshire Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 10:43 AM
I don't know if this was based on a true experience, but it certainly sounds real. Very nice work, Carol. Congratulations on a great win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Mitra Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Thanks Carolyn... we grew up hearing this story time and again from my mum...so I guess it was true, I was small when it happened and grew tall hearing it :)
Brul Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Ohh very sad...You vividly conveyed the sadness in your last line, "The milk bottles were empty." Great piece!
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 11:13 PM
Thanks JCB.....much appreciated.
Leffanta Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Nice one! Aloha! Rico
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Rico.
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