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The Mighty Cedar

The mighty tree leaning
Into the shore
Wind swept stark
Some limbs totally nude

In the silhouetted 
Hours of the night
By soft full moonlight
Its black outline against Cobalt Blue
Water and land

The distinct shape appears
The shape of a Bird of Paradise
The plumage full almost see a twist
A twist of its head
As it looks at the moon
Its call is absent
Imagination at work
Can surely supply a simple call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:07 AM
excellent peace here again duncan thank you
Keys Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 4:00 PM
bravo ... the imagery, the flow, very senseous, great job, thanks chuck
Knop Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Awesomwe tribute to nature, Sara! Have you ever seen a Bird of Paradise live? I remember well when a pair these birds were sitting in a Jacaranda tree near to our house in Papua New Guinea---waht a sight!!! Enjoyed the read very much...Gert
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 6:47 AM
thought provoking, good imagrey, will check your site more fully oh! and thank you for your kind words.
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 6:09 AM
What an excellent write enjoyed reading Sara. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 4:49 AM
I really liked this one Sara ... nicely done ... Love Jayne
R Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 2:47 AM
Loved your imagery in this free verse beauty, Sara:) Hugs, Emilia
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 6:22 PM
wow, this is very good, Sara, and it put me in mind of my old oak. Luv, Andrea
Locksley Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 4:44 PM
What bautiful images of the "Bird of Paradise" in the evening, Sara. Imagination is everything to people who enjoy writing, and maybe for the bird as well. Best to you, Diane
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September 30, 2010 at 3:39 PM
lovely one Sarah, enjoyed your write..P.D.
Falotico Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Love this write Sara, well done my dear..Always Michael
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September 30, 2010 at 9:58 AM
great write mom!! enjoyed!
Babcock Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 9:44 AM
You create a beautiful scene with this poem. enjoyed the read Sara. GOD Bless phyl
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