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The Merry Moss

Was on the merry moss of childhood Lazing in the haze of spring Gathering the idle berries Our young ears heard the starlings sing Though tomorrow seemed forever And the starlings sang our virgin joy We impatient imps of folly Ran on to pass the stagnant boy Still on to adult destination Proud to be the rapid steed We spurred on the mortal gallop That took us with uncommon speed Yet on to the reluctant curfew Withered, weathered, dry with loss A single wish shouts its finale Return beneath the merry moss

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Date: 4/12/2016 10:31:00 AM
A little gem. Congrats. daver
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Date: 3/29/2016 7:47:00 AM
Hey Andrew :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2016 5:55:00 PM
Thanks so much. I dug up an old journal with Star Wars figures on the cover. There were a few poems I found in there which I tweeked and put them on this site. So good to share interests with people. The world is such a cold place today one sometimes forgets there are like souls all around the globe.
Date: 3/28/2016 7:03:00 PM
Andrew,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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