The Mermaid In the Water

She stands on cliff’s edge in her skimpiest nightie, not caring who sees.
Feeling her connection with the east wind which has always protected her.
The shale-like red rocks have settled, they give her a firm grasp of herself. She goes to the edge.
Peers down, wondering if she should have brought someone else, so there would be a witness.

It is only thirty-two feet to the water, her Dad used to say, before he dove off this cliff.
She watched him do it at least six or eight times during his lifetime, he was 78 the last time.
She had never tried it, never feeling that her swimming was good enough, but today felt different.
She felt invincible today; she had a dream about this, and she knew she had to try as a tribute.

In her father’s honor she takes a dive of faith, 
falling rapidly toward the water below.
There is a crack as she hits it, she feels like it has 
slapped her face. She is coughing and sputtering.
Underwater, she feels scared and cold, ‘Just like Dad,’ 
says a whispery voice, startling her. 
It is not until she is sitting near a warm fire, 
in her home that she remembers a sister she never knew.

Dad always said the cliff had magical powers, 
but to develop them, you had to take the plunge.
Her sister was killed in a freak accident when they were little; 
she had been a few months old.
She rarely thought of her or the few photos she had of them.

Had her sister been the mermaid in the water? 
She ponders this for a bit, as her toes warm up.
The flames nod in agreement.  She feels her Dad beside her. 
She knows she must go back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/28/2018 3:25:00 PM
Eerie story; it's strange what such incidents can make one recall.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 8:50:00 PM
I have to say when these become every day incidents, they are way less eerie.
Date: 12/26/2018 11:45:00 AM
Interesting and a bit scary of a tale! Let me know what you think of my older poem, Seduction of the Siren Sisters.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2018 12:42:00 PM
I will race to it as soon as I have my lunch, or maybe sooner as impulsive and impetuous are my middle names. I have tried to find it, and found one, but I have no idea if it is yours as there is no name on it. Could you email it to me? PeterPanInFemale@gmail.com
Date: 12/26/2018 1:04:00 AM
Oh Caren, I am feeling truly moved by your beautifully, emotional poem, wow!!! It took me with her into the depths and I wasn't sure if she would return or if this would be her final swim. Thank you Caren. Kindest thoughts Ann xx a definite FAV for me...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I am so glad that you liked it. In my family we have such moments so often, it was not a stretch in the least. Communication from those who have passed over is often, and in many forms - dreams, swimming, and other relaxed states - such as staring into a fire bring them on. They visit us in glimpses, smells, and with whispers, or shouts. Thank you Ann.
Date: 12/26/2018 12:08:00 AM
as like as folktale !- great
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/26/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab. It is a folktale until it is your reality. And then it is truth. Smile.
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