The Mermaid And Me

I was alone, watching the sunset
  seated on a line of rocks, not wet
Holding two small pieces of rock 
  and a pentel pen with me
I wrote a mark on the said rocks
  I found underneath me
And threw away the two pieces of rock
  in the nebulous, salty waters.
After a while, one small rock was thrown back
  wrapped in algae with some lathers.
I stood up and picked it up
  and walked on the same line of dry rocks
  where I sat earlier.
Another piece of rock thrown back --
  the same piece of small rock I marked "4ever"
I looked around... up, left and right
  and saw no one.
A strong wind blew at my feet
  and circled around my body of heat
When I looked down on the waters,
  touching my head with my cold hand
I saw a smiling mermaid...
  waving at me with a heart-shaped hand.
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Date: 9/28/2023 8:18:00 AM
Nice one friend. I think I want to paint it soon. A beautiful mermaid was in love with you. Have anice day and thanks for passing by on my poem. Hugs
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 9/28/2023 9:59:00 AM
I'm honored for your visit Teacher BL. Take care always! :) Cliff
Date: 9/23/2023 6:20:00 AM
So charming Clifford! Such whimsy! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/24/2023 9:15:00 AM
I do my best Cliff. Thank you. :)
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 9/23/2023 1:31:00 PM
You always sound warm and gentle Miss Linda... :) Cliff
Date: 5/13/2023 10:08:00 PM
She sounds lovely, especially with heart shaped hands. What a great story and a splendid imaginative poem. It was fun to see as I read. Your last 6 lines were my favorite. Maybe you should go for a swim soon:)
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 5/16/2023 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for the warm comment Miss Marikate. =)
Date: 4/26/2023 5:52:00 AM
A most engaging narrative with images of sea lore that trigger the reader's imagination. Well penned Clifford. Sincerely, Brian
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 9/23/2023 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Sir Brian. Your visit sometime ago is very much appreciated. :) Cliff
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