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The Memory of Skulls On a Hill

The air-ward climb – On the weaver’s hill: Ozone-layered: across The delight of new eggs; Soft – in my intent, brief! Transitory; leaping From side to brighter side; The non-conceived patterns Growing in frequencies By our sea-storms and dead deluge: Are they brief? Are they intent? These cata-combs of broken skulls! Are they the import of our essence?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/2/2010 12:25:00 AM
i like the images in this poem. I also find the questions in the last stanza interesting. Wonderful write. Congratulations on making the contest's first cut.
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Canny. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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Date: 5/31/2010 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 10/14/2009 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful piece of poetry. Really good. Gidds
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