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The Melting Kiss That Awakened My Dreams-A Collaboration With Jimmy Anderson

You walked up to me and took me by surprise Spun me around and looked deep in my eyes When I felt your hot breath on my neck so near I collapsed into your arms and forgot my fear Staring back into your dark eyes I could swear I see the universe completing itself in there There's a difference in us tonight it seems This melting kiss awakening my dreams I awakened feeling complete,my soul at peace Your kiss quickens my heartbeat,and this passion demands release! We laid melded together,at the top of the universe You gave me a love forever,and cured me of a heartbreaking curse! We long forgot,the heartaching,loneliness and fear I became your Lancelot,and you became my Guinevere! Nothing could compare to this,for the sensation reigns supreme Your melting kiss awakens my very dream....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2011 9:47:00 AM
You can describe the most beautiful dream, whenever you and Jimmy make a team. What do you know, that rhymes! Good work here, my dear. That rhymes too!
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:24:00 AM
Deb, what a great passionate collaboration, you and Jimmy make a great team ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:47:00 AM
Very passionate write,Deb.Excellent poetry
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Date: 1/11/2011 7:06:00 PM
Wow Deb u and Jimmy are on a romantic roll with this beautiful piece of poetry ... kudos to u both for sharing with us all.. continued success with these elegant pieces luv..
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Date: 1/11/2011 5:40:00 PM
Wow. Passionate indeed. I love the idea of a 'melting kiss'. And I love the collaboration of this poem. Very good, to both of you. Best wishes, Deb
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