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Are those tears on my cheek, in my eyes, at their peak? The melody speaks so simply of love, of Sonny and Cher. I share this idea that love can grasp, whether moments in time, though they don’t last, still looking back. Looking back at my parents’ romance who would’ve thought. No wonder they were drawn to the duo, dynamically funny and melodic. May not be Bocelli and Dion, “My Prayer,” but it reaches to my deepest heart - to hear from one another, “I’ve got you, Babe,” in all its nuanced and youthful ways. Perfectionism, our eyes glaze over, giddy with twin palpitations. No one meets the standards. Grief tears us apart. Some really believe they had the perfect thing - twisting the ring…ahh, twisting the hair…ooh. Close to heaven, but big galoot you betray yourself - offering incense, incensed at the offing…so deep your chin hits the floor. “Amazing Grace,” sets us back on our feet, honoring God in life, at death. Are those tears on my cheek, in my eyes, at their peak? The melody speaks…

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Date: 8/15/2023 10:26:00 AM
Wonderful write. Pity they separated.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2023 10:33:00 AM
So sweet to have you here! <3 Hugs!
Date: 8/14/2023 5:24:00 PM
I think indeed they were a loving couple...and best of friends, seeming to truly have fun together, laughing and carrying on. Excellent read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2023 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 8/13/2023 4:12:00 PM
I'm of that generation. I watched the show. hated the divorce. Hated when Sonny hit that tree. Still see Cher as a half breed. and liked this poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2023 7:26:00 PM
Yup! I recently rewatched Cher at his funeral. All things change during our generation.
Date: 8/13/2023 2:34:00 PM
And the beat goes on. Not only a great singer/songwriting team but Cher was a marvelous actress. A nice tribute to the early years.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2023 3:20:00 PM
Truly!
Date: 8/13/2023 7:24:00 AM
Beautifully and poetically written, Kim. The melody of Love is such a blessing to see in others and to experience in one's own life. As for "Amazing Grace", I sang it at for father funeral ... tears and all, I was happy for him. He was a minister hear on Earth, and I see him as a voice lifted up to praise God in heaven. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2023 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful comment, Bill! They played the music as they carried my grandma’s coffin out.
Date: 8/12/2023 8:12:00 PM
From Sonny and Cher to Amazing Grace, this poem's melody sets the pace. Interesting write, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 8/12/2023 6:05:00 PM
Oh, how splendid is this exquisite verse, Kim! Its simplicity exudes a profound beauty. Your melodic composition resounds with great eloquence, just as you aptly described it—a harmonious duet where the melody truly speaks.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2023 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! I appreciate you!
Date: 8/12/2023 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Kim, in its simplicity! Your melodic poem speaks! :) -Hug-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 8/12/2023 2:20:00 PM
a great duo, as you said, the melody speaks, and i adore " Amazing grace" thanks a lot
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, yann!

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