The Melancholy Man and His Magic Pen

The melancholy man who loves a poem - into a hidden room will now descend to there unloose his mind and soul to roam; his pen, meanwhile, grows a feathered end. This implement can take away his pain and harness it. When disappointment surges, it marks his pondering in sad refrain; then melancholy poetry emerges. The plume dissolves. The poet lays aside his special pen, while to their deepest shelf, regrets return in his dark room to hide until released again from inner self. Like magic, when the quill begins to grow, a smile molds the lips of the man of woe. Tribute to Dan Tharp, an old poet friend that lost contact with me and others in the club where we met him. His poetry, though sad at times, can be beautiful and nostalgic. For Francine Roberts' "tribute by Sonnet" Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/18/2020 5:30:00 PM
This is a wonderful tribute to your friend from the Shadow Poetry days. I have read a few of his poems in the SP Quill and the 2008 Shadows Ink book you have given me, and I agree with you; he's a very talented writer. You describe so well the writing process, especially that of a melancholy person. I'm sorry you have lost touch with him.
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Date: 9/12/2012 5:08:00 AM
another classic gem, from the queen of sonnets,
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Date: 7/23/2012 11:42:00 AM
I have read several of your poems tonight, you seem to have quite an imagination. I think this poem of yours could have been written about many poets, afterall, if you ask the average person what a poet is like, he is very likely to use a few descriptions such as: sad, melancholy or emotional.
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:42:00 PM
congrats again Andrea on another brilliant win for a fantastic poem on this theme.. nicely written my frienf.. enjoy weekend..
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Date: 7/12/2012 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent sonnet.
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Date: 7/12/2012 6:29:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Outstanding. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 7/12/2012 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Tribute By Sonnet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:18:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, I missed this one, excellent piece..David
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Date: 7/11/2012 10:40:00 PM
congrats on your 6th place win Andrea, wonderful tribute
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Date: 6/23/2012 7:38:00 PM
A winner, I'm sure! love your flow, rhyme and imagery... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:28:00 PM
wow very nice my friend.i really enjoy reading this poem.magic pen? i have a magic pen
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Date: 6/21/2012 9:50:00 AM
A nice tribute to Dan with his magic pen. The new lap top is my son's and I am using it up here. Will be back home tomorrow night. Holidays next week so heading to B.C. for my nephews grad. Good luck in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:08:00 PM
Another one... hmmm you really inspire... I might try one day... but not soon... but I think I get a 'feel' for what should be done (a long way from the actual 'production, alas).. again, a very nice poem... Terry
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Date: 6/17/2012 11:34:00 PM
very impressive, and it has a lot of pathos behind it, andie... hope you can connect with dan again... nice winning job!.. :) huggs!
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Date: 6/17/2012 8:00:00 PM
You have a wonderful way with words, they flow through the air so sweetly.
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:11:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading it this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, the artificial sweeteners can be bad very bad for one's health..I can't stand the after bite of them including stevia..Saccharine is the only one that doesn't bother me but it has to be in very small portion and used mostly in tea and coffee.Splenda I can use some even in baking...Sara
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Date: 6/17/2012 1:50:00 PM
Too bad he's not around to hear these special words penned for his ear. Only God's grace can quell the soul. When someone leaves a great big hole.
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Date: 6/17/2012 4:18:00 AM
The melancholy man is presented nicely,Andrea.Good luck in the contest.My book,Moonlight and Solitude,a collection of poems will be launched soon
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:58:00 PM
Andrea, good luck in the contest....xox~pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 3:03:00 PM
Glad to read of your friend and to read this write Andrea; here's wishing you the best results in that contest.
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Date: 6/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
Hi sweetie, I wonder if you had a feathered pen writing this. It has that touch of sadness of memories now stored to feast on in quiet moments. This is such a special sonnet and I love It. Lizzie P S We need higher ratings for these special ones!
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:21:00 PM
lovely tribute to your friend. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 6/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
This is a glorious write dedicated to a melancholy man! You wrote illustriously and full of majestic glory! I really enjoyed reading what this special pen wrote! Awesome tribute my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:33:00 AM
Really a great tribute with wonderful poem worded. Loved this specially, always bl
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Date: 6/16/2012 6:09:00 AM
A great tribute. Well penned. Enjoyed.
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