The Meeting (A Collaboration/Audrey Carey)

They watch each other from across the room
An Angel on earth reborn and a Fallen Star
They both know that look well, strong attraction and they’re hypnotized!
Under that spell, a sexual high, in their minds’ eye fantasize….

Fallen Star:
Damn, she looks delicious in that dress!
Looks like a Dolce Gabbana and she’s wearing it with such finesse!

The Angel:
Hmm, who is he, I wonder? And what’s with the intense stare?
Probably freaky, too. Seems cool.. His looks, the clothes.. O, I really don’t care

Fallen Star:
I wonder if I should walk up and ask her name?
I can tell by her stare, she may be feeling the same.

The Angel:
I like his swagger. But, so help me if this is just a show, I’ll give him a scare
I’ll lay one on him, and the amateur will disappear!

Fallen Star:
Wow, just the way she licks her lips, I’m already tongue-tied
And those voluptuous hips have me standing google-eyed!

The Angel:
So, it looks like a contest. Who’ll be the first to look away?
I’m up to the challenge, ‘cause I love to play

Fallen Star:
She can probably hear my heart pounding! Like a drum beating in my chest!
The image of perfect art, these other women are no contest!

The Angel:
It's hot in here. Or is it just me? And what’s with this jittery feeling? Please! 
What's this? Well, this napkin will do. Just can’t look away. How I love to tease!

Fallen Star:
May as well down this drink, walk over and say, “hey”
Wow, did she just give me a wink? This makes my day!

The crowd seems to part, and they stand face to face, two racing hearts beating
He takes the Angel’s hand, time to explore; he leads her to the dance floor…..

* Collaboration with Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/1/2010 11:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jimmy and Audrey. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:58:00 PM
Nicely done you two - once again.
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:54:00 AM
Great poem! - Best, Karen
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:22:00 AM
Totally enjoyed, JAM!! These are always loads of fun and laughter!! I love this..I'm coming up with the next one...soon.... love, Peanut Butter
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