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The Meeting (A Collaboration/Audrey Carey)

They watch each other from across the room An Angel on earth reborn and a Fallen Star They both know that look well, strong attraction and they’re hypnotized! Under that spell, a sexual high, in their minds’ eye fantasize…. Fallen Star: Damn, she looks delicious in that dress! Looks like a Dolce Gabbana and she’s wearing it with such finesse! The Angel: Hmm, who is he, I wonder? And what’s with the intense stare? Probably freaky, too. Seems cool.. His looks, the clothes.. O, I really don’t care Fallen Star: I wonder if I should walk up and ask her name? I can tell by her stare, she may be feeling the same. The Angel: I like his swagger. But, so help me if this is just a show, I’ll give him a scare I’ll lay one on him, and the amateur will disappear! Fallen Star: Wow, just the way she licks her lips, I’m already tongue-tied And those voluptuous hips have me standing google-eyed! The Angel: So, it looks like a contest. Who’ll be the first to look away? I’m up to the challenge, ‘cause I love to play Fallen Star: She can probably hear my heart pounding! Like a drum beating in my chest! The image of perfect art, these other women are no contest! The Angel: It's hot in here. Or is it just me? And what’s with this jittery feeling? Please! What's this? Well, this napkin will do. Just can’t look away. How I love to tease! Fallen Star: May as well down this drink, walk over and say, “hey” Wow, did she just give me a wink? This makes my day! The crowd seems to part, and they stand face to face, two racing hearts beating He takes the Angel’s hand, time to explore; he leads her to the dance floor….. * Collaboration with Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 11:45:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jimmy and Audrey. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:58:00 PM
Nicely done you two - once again.
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:54:00 AM
Great poem! - Best, Karen
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:22:00 AM
Totally enjoyed, JAM!! These are always loads of fun and laughter!! I love this..I'm coming up with the next one...soon.... love, Peanut Butter
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