The Marriage One Spring

The Marriage One Spring

Carriage was white and horses dapple-gray.
Dreamy, like a fairytale, true love that day.
Sparkling eyes lit up the dressing room
Hidden away from the guests and bridegroom.

Time had arrived; music began to play.
The Wedding March.” rang on that special day,
Strikingly posh was the most gorgeous gown. 
Gleaming with love the bride slowly walked down.

The bridegroom, smiling, would make vows for life
There at the church, the bride became his wife.
Lovers together kissed wearing their rings.
Then, rode to forever, love, one warm spring.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
January 27, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anderson Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations on another win, Dane Ann....Beautiful write. ....Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:20 AM
"Belated Congratulations" on this beautifully written poem Dane! Sincere, Agape, Mose
Villarosa Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:21 AM
This is the moment of ending celibacy and sharing life with somebody. I can feel the warmth words here as we enjoy the spring time. Congratulations on your win, Dane Ann. (^_^) Noel.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 3:48 AM
Dane Ann, Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem of how every woman would love her wedding to go. Beautiful! Blessings, Connie
Culverhouse Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 6:05 AM
hot poem!!
Haick Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Dear Dane Ann, my congratulations on your win the contest! I missed this one also! Don't even know why! Splendid! Hope you're doing well. My SM doesn't work so just know that I think about you sometimes! Peace and love, Audrey
Esquire Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:10 PM
My Dear Dane Ann, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Mac McGovern's Contest "Anything Goes" This Brings back Memories of My Everlasting Day Although Lenore and I did not "Ride to Forever" Together YOU deserve a Wreath of Laurel FOR this Fasinating Write LOVE ALWAYS...HG
K. Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:09 AM
Can't help but picture this lovely day in my mind :) A beautiful poem about a beautiful love story, it reads like a fairy tale and a dream, just lovely :) congrats on your win with this, Dane Ann :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 1:05 PM
A lovely picture created, exactly as stated in the title! A big congrats to you, Dane Ann, on winning in MAc's first contest! lUv,Andrea
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Dane Ann. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 9:04 PM
A lovely poem, Dane Ann, filled with the joy and hope newlyweds have in their hearts. Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest! Love, Carolyn
 Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:59 PM
What uplifting poem of new love and its capacity to last. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest.. well deserved win for an excellent write.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. thankxxx so very much for your precious comments on my poetry today... u are a dear blessed friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Fraser Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Bonnie pictures of many many brides on their special day Dane Ann, gorgeous piece >> James
Strand Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 12:50 AM
Pretty pictures Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.I understand ,here in England it is made from the flower like the home-made wine of the same name
Bono Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 6:23 PM
sounds like the perfect wedding.Hope you had a great day today.I posted a new poem.
Chircop Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Lovely ,its like a fairytale dream with a happy ending,beautiful,can picture this warm spring scene..Charma
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace