The Marigold

Like charcoal stain as thick as soot, the leaves were crumbling underfoot, and murkiness was manifold. I stood, enveloped by a fog, a lonesome figure in the bog, and shuddered in the gloaming's cold. As through the woods I'd had to grope, I'd had no beam of shining hope. I'd stopped, for I'd become less bold. . . And now I had grown feverish with longing, so I made a wish for light to touch me hundredfold. . . I must have fallen to the ground, for I awoke to sun and sound. Such beauty I was to behold, for near my face, in ruddy tint, like something in an artist’s print was one amazing, perfect marigold! For Deb Wilson's Maybe I'm Amazed!Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 10:54 PM
High fives Andrea! Congratulations on your top placement! Such a dark, forbidding picture in most of the poem - all contrasted with your "one, amazing, perfect marigold." Really nice my friend.
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 4:58 AM
Beautifully written wonderful poem here. Bravo!
Glover Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Beautiful take on the marigold. Very well written and I love your rhyming scheme. Great Job
Anderson-Throop Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 7:06 PM
lovely imagery
Bauer Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 12:39 PM
i love the format and rhyme of this poem. it is so deserving of its win in the contest - just, yes, amazing!
Hunter Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Congrats on your win with this one, Andrea. And I am 1/4 Irish, 1/4 Scottish, 1/4 English, 1/8 Cherokee, and who knows the rest.
Arowolo Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Great write....Hmm! what a master piece...Congrats on your superb win,great friend...Kudos to you...XOXO...
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations Andrea on yet another great win....Donna
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Lovely Andrea. Amazing poetry. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Gosh Andrea what an intriguing poem. A well deserved win. Congratulations, such talent you have. An inspiration. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD
Dillard Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 10:53 AM
I love it! Reads like the birth of a diamond! What a gem! RAY
Eastman Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Congrats on such a flowing poem. Great win! Great poem.
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 9:14 AM
What a lovely poem, Andrea!! I just got a touch of spring fever yesterday, and planted my first marigolds! Praying it doesn't freeze now!! :) Congratulations!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 7:24 AM
I like the feel of this one. Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 6:52 AM
A surprise ending! I think I might pick a different flower though, marigolds are pretty stinky and since it seems fall maybe a mushroom gold? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 5:17 AM
I like the rhyme scheme....wonderful write...congrats on you win
Hicks Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 11:24 AM
I love the idea of falling down and then witnessing something beautiful just mere inches away. Makes all the hardship beforehand seem less daunting... lovely writing!
Babcock Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Love the image you create here on this poem. Wonderful my friend. love phyl
Duncan Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 6:33 PM
great words up there " like something in an artist's print ;},,,,,, Yes I did have the dream about Sandy. Then around two days later, my sis and I were talking on phone. Her news came on, she said you better look at the news Deb, I think you you know her.
Bolden Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 7:12 AM
wonderful job on this..
Devnath  Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Superb description my friend. Thanks for your comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Ober Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Masterfully written! The imagery here is astounding. Good luck in the contest, my friend!
Agtani Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Hello Andrea! How have you been? Me? I am alive and well! I am here to enjoy poetry again including your creative, unique verses! Love Dalila
Sibanda Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Well-written, as usual. Behold, marigold.
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