The Marathon of Silence

2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 11 Contest //Sponsored by: Mark Toney
Contest Judged:  8/29/2025 12:41:00 PM
( 2nd Place )

Written: August 27, 2025


No trumpet greets the weary stride,
only gravel grinding underfoot,
the breath that rasps against the bone.

I have shouldered storm inside my chest,
their weight pressing like half-done prayers.
The world does not wait for heartbreaks
yet still I walk through its indifference.

The road is merciless with distance,
a ribbon extended beyond all sight
but its distance carves the truth of what I carry.

Every scar is a mile-marker wherein
every fall a lesson written in dust.
Hope is not the flag at the end-
it is the breath that urges: once more, once more.

I walk with shadows
and with the ghosts of those who stumble.
Yet I walk alight with the strength of survivors.

At last, I see it;
not a gate and not a crown
but a quiet clearing where the tired wind rests.
There, I set down my burden
not defeated
but strengthened!

The finish line was never drawn on the ground.
It has always remained inside the soul
waiting to be crossed.
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Ashley Avatar
September 6, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Dear Rowena, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your exceptional poem. Your imagery and metaphors are rich, evocative and and filled with fortitude. A poem filled with soul-baring beauty! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
George Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 9:19 PM
What an amazing write.... so true to the hazardous race we run in life. "At last, I see it; not a gate and not a crown but a quiet clearing where the tired wind rests. There, I set down my burden not defeated but strengthened!" What an insightful closing!! Every defeat is a lesson learned. You are so gifted dear friend. Congratulations on your great win, Rowena.
Velasco Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 4:12 AM
Thank you, Valsa.
Toney Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 8:04 PM
"Rowena, your theme was cool but your poetry made it awesome! The last three lines blew me away. Congratulations on your second place win on Mile 11 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 12 has already started.
Velasco Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 8:05 PM
Thank you so much! I’m honored by the placement and thrilled the ending touched you. Ready to keep running into Mile 12!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 4:57 PM
I can so appreciate and relate to the 'running' metaphor. This poem is deep and thought provoking and one I can deeply relate to. I especially liked these lines, for they resonated with me: The finish line was never drawn on the ground. It has always remained inside the soul waiting to be crossed. wishing you a pleasant evening!
Velasco Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:59 PM
That’s such a kind and thoughtful comment, Sara .I’m glad the metaphor spoke to you in a personal way. Wishing you a peaceful and pleasant evening as well!
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