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The Mango Tree

The Mango tree

She was waiting for me  where I chose to
build a house   and set up my family. 
She too grew up,  but on her own. Sheltered  
my house from the  sun and  extended her  
sweetness every time for free.  Now, a 
grandma, her limbs are weak. I am afraid 
she will collapse over my home in the 
next April’s gale. And therefore I think of 
sending her off to an old-age-home,  the 
timber merchant’s yard. She protests not.
As if sensing my mind, she is all blooms 
as never before, and I’m in two minds.

23 Aug 2015
Form: Personification
For Charlotte's 'Trees personified' contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/19/2016 11:16:00 AM
Anna, it is superb write. Enjoyed ur entire poem..........// hugs
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:58:00 PM
WOW, love it Jag, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:02:00 PM
Sir , your poetic approach is good.Think twice before you bereave from it.After its removal the shade will not pervade in our house. Parching sun in summer .
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Date: 8/23/2015 4:42:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery and a unique take on the theme - I love the portrayal of her as an old lady I'm so glad 'she' flourished and didn't get chopped down - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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