The Man O'War HMS Arcturus

The Man O'War HMS Arcturus dominated the billowin' main!
Foes were fearful of closin' battle with 'er should they ever deign!
What a magnificent and imposin' sight was she with 'er riggin' full o'sail,
As she raced to and fro with Union Jack a-snappin' leavin' havoc in 'er trail!

The Master, Captain Pettigrew, ran a taut ship but was beloved by his crew.
He had led them through battle and stormy gale - they were tried and true.
Captain Pettigrew held to tradition and was generous with the cup o'rum.
His crew would follow him anywhere, though at times spent and numb!

Durin' the din of battle when lethal shell flew and the cannon roared,
And though the deck was awash with blood upon its oaken board,
Midst the billowin' smoke they saw their gallant captain a-standin' tall,
A source of strength and courage, exhortin' victory from one and all!

Though many a battle and ragin' storm upon 'er had taken their toll,
And 'er wooden hull groaned and creaked with every sea-tossed roll,
She was the pride of the British Fleet and there was nary another like 'er!
Just ask any of the crew who served on 'er and they would concur!

She made 'er final cruise in 1837 leavin' port sailin' o'er the horizon,
In 'er usual majestic style, fully rigged displayin' flyin' jib and mizzen!
Alas, she disappeared and 'er plight was never really known for true.
Only He Who rules the seas knows the fate of HMS Arcturus and her crew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/12/2021 10:55:00 AM
The dialect you chose here helped take me back in time to the HMS Arcturus. Fine poem, congrats on your placement!
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Date: 11/11/2021 10:37:00 PM
Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2016 10:41:00 AM
Lately the British commissioned a new ship and ask the public to name it... The name chosen by the people was "Boaty McBoat Face". They wouldn't let them have the name... but did allow the on board small submarine to have the name... REALLY! LOL... How times have changed. I bet that's the last time they let the public decide.
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful in the most unique way.. Loving this piece so much
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Date: 4/18/2016 4:19:00 PM
Superb write which reminds me of Roger Whittaker's hit song "The Last Farewell".
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:41:00 AM
a wonderful nautical tale Bob:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2016 9:03:00 PM
G'day Bob ... your poem may be fictional but it tells the tale of many a ship and sailor lost at sea - Lindsay
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Date: 4/11/2016 7:11:00 PM
a wonderful tale told as only you can do it, bob! i was surprised to read that it's fictional - you made me believe every word! great write...
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Date: 4/11/2016 5:58:00 PM
Really love the nautical tale Bob. Peace my friend:)
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