The Man In the Window

He crawled thru our window
A man with no hair
Standing four feet tall
Every night he was there

We moved to this house
Not knowing of its lore
Not hearing of the evil
That lurked there before

A murder took place 
By a man and his mother
A sibling was killed
He stabbed his own brother

He would walk to our bed
Night after night
With evil in his eyes
And our hearts filled with fright

In a lab coat of white
And blood on his chest
He told us he'd kill us
For this was his quest

Only in this room
Would he always appear
To fill me and my brothers
With breathtaking fear

When we moved to another
The room would be clean
Neither mother or her son
Would ever be seen

My mother would tell us
It was only a dream
Til his mother she saw
With a blood curdling scream

The front door was locked
But like a phantom magician
She walked thru the walls
This ghostly apparition

She sat in a chair
And rocked while she laughed
My mother was paralyzed
By this witch and her craft

"You can't move can you dear?"
The woman replied
She said the death smell was sickening
From this woman who'd died

In the middle of the night
Doors would open then close
Who's coming and going?
None of us knows

The neighbors all knew
Of the things that occured
But all were too scared
To utter a word

My father would sit 
By our bedside each night
Til we all fell asleep
Then turn out the light

This story is true
I was six years old
The house is still standing
And the story still told

Each Halloween season
This house will appear
In our town's local newspaper
To fill us with fear

Though now it stands empty
Many families passed thru
And all will attest
That what I've told you, is true


For Amy's I saw with my own eyes contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Wow, what an amazing write, I was captured from the first word. A very deserving first place win... love constance
Taylor Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 5:35 PM
That was scary and chilling. Terrific write. Congrats on the win - well deserved. Ralph
Johnson Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 7:44 PM
What a scary tale and especially for a 6 year old. I tcertaily was a good choice for first place. Congraulations. Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 1:47 PM
My goodness that is quite the tale. I am surprised it has not gotten national coverage on one of those ghost buster type shows. rEally, you ought to bring it to the attention of those tv producers!! Congratulations! andrea
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Yikes,, this is so scary..congrats on your win.. i hope this wasnt a true story...BG
Richards Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations, scary if it was really true...wow!! Well done!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Big congrats Larry on your 1st place win in Amy's contest with this "beauty"... enjoy your number one as we enjoy this read..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Foster Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 2:37 AM
Real creepy story well told. congratulations Larry, well done....Margaret
Green Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 11:22 PM
I should have known this was you... with the style of writing. Congrats, Larry on 1st place in my contest. CREEPY!!!
Orschell Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 9:07 AM
It gave me shivers Larry. Keep it up and good luck in the contest. Love Destiny
Taylor Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Excellent, Larry. Good luck in the contest. This one will be hard to beat.
Culverhouse Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:20 AM
did you really see a ghost? creepy
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