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The Man In the Moon

The Man in the Moon
His face shown bright this summer night while hanging in the sky, and all the while his golden smile did friendliness imply. He saw her there, a lass so fair, just sitting by herself; without a lad, and looking sad, wall flower on a shelf. “And why my dear, just sitting here” he softly asked the girl, “on night so bright, it’s just not right for thoughts of life to swirl.” “I’m on my own, and all alone,” she answered with a sigh, “no one to keep me company, I feel like I could cry.” The moon replied, “Don’t be denied, there’s love out to be found. My dearest one, don’t come undone no tears upon the ground. Rise to your feet this night to greet, a world that’s full of mirth. Don’t be so blind, go out and find the measure of your worth.” To all behold this orb of gold who’s holding out his hand, while shining bright this summer night, and smiling on the land.
July 5, 2019

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Date: 11/20/2019 3:50:00 PM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and I like your image too!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/21/2019 3:56:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. Hugs, John
Date: 7/30/2019 1:26:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/30/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thanks so much for the wonderful comment, Funom, I appreciate it. I'm humbled by your thoughts. John
Date: 7/17/2019 9:38:00 PM
So deserving of more than an Honorable Mention. This ranks so much higher than that. Such a Wonderful Message behind the words. It seems as though I am the only one that truly understood these thoughts from your heart. Congratulations John, on this win. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/18/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, you comments mean a great deal to me. I appreciate you and your thoughts. All my best. John
Date: 7/10/2019 6:40:00 AM
what a lovely poem you have penned here, as a child i always swore the moon had a face! Enjoyed this one John! hugs :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/10/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandy, I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale. Hugs, John
Date: 7/6/2019 9:01:00 AM
A wonderful write...full of hope...
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo, I appreciate your kind words. John
Date: 7/6/2019 2:22:00 AM
A terrific story with great personification from both the moon and the girl - very clever and a fav John, Hugs and blessings.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenn, I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. And thank you my friend for saving it as a favorite. Hugs, John
Date: 7/5/2019 7:58:00 PM
a beautiful little tale this is, John! So creative.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 7/5/2019 6:57:00 PM
"Don’t be so blind, go out and find the measure of your worth" Exactly. This statement holds so much truth. Your entire poem touches the heart. "The Man in the Moon" Could it be within ourselves we find the answers we seek? Perhaps. I truly think so. You have created another Masterpiece my friend. I wish to save this in my favorites as well. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy, for your wonderful comments and support and for the fav. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. John
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