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November-4-2025

The Man in the Elevator Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Charles Messina


 

The Man in the Elevator-CM

The man in the elevator had to get down at the ground floor
The elevator glided smoothly till the third floor
When about to get down, the man found to his great dismay
That the lift got stuck in the middle with all fellow travellers away

His heart began thumping fast, the air grew thicker
Drenched in sweat, he found his energy waning quicker.
Fear seized him and he couldn’t think of anything else
Losing control, a warmth running down his thighs, he did sense.

When the security staff finally came to rescue the fool
He was found squatting on the floor in a pool
He had peed on his trousers, and accepting all blame
Felt relieved to be out of that cage, though at the risk of shame.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 10:23 PM
Oh my. That would be super embarrassing. Good thinking with this prompt. I think this contest has not even been judged yet, right. Good luck with it. I hope he likes my poem too
DiMino Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:17 PM
Well, I understand claustrophobia big time. No fun for anyone, being trapped in an elevator...but for someone with claustrophobia it is sheer hell. Well said, Valsa. To pee or not to pee?! As a great poet once said.
Narain Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Lol! It gets worst with age. Poor felloew.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:46 AM
- Getting stuck in an elevator is a terrible experience, Valsa (I've experienced it, but I didn't pee my pants :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:48 PM
lol! Poor fellow! I’m at the age where I have to go every 30 minutes it seems! Great job! Best wishes!
Greenhough Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:02 PM
They need to put toilets in elevators. I love your poem. It has great humor. I'll take the stairs, thank you.
Hind Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 8:54 PM
LOL funny stuff, I think I would lose it too
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