Written, October 31, 2025 For The Premiere Contest, “The Man In The Elevator Sponsor, Charles Messina
The man in the elevator Looked scared as we entered the door Red-handed was caught When items not bought Quick tumbled all over the floor At first glance, he looked sort of fat Round stomach and full where he sat Seemed under his coat Beer bottles built bloat Held by a weak sling- they went splat!
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