The Man In The Elevator - CM

"The man in the elevator," was dressed like a headwaiter. The music playing was not soft but really loud, he grabbed me like a fluffy cloud. We danced then he bowed, with a smile looking so proud. I said nice cologne, he replied I am wearing my favorite mustard ~ Dijon.
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Swan Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 2:31 AM
This is surreal, so funny. Reading to me had a Mary-Poppins type parallel-time in it. J :)
George Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 7:21 PM
Congratulations dear Paula on your great win. Love and hugs. Have a great week ahead!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away...................
Volumes Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Congrats dear Paula. This was a bright start to my morning. Thank you sweet lady,
Goldsmith Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. Great to know I was a bright start to your morning. That makes me happy. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away...................
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Paula, I just loved that last line! Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Happy writing dear friend! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you loved my fun last line on my "The Man In The Elevator" write. I think all the men will be wearing mustard ~ Dijon this Christmas holiday. Hahahaha!!!! This was a ton of fun to bring to life. Thanks for the fun content and placement. Have a fun day as you go writing away...................
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:05 AM
"3 Place" "The Man In The Elevator"  Rhyme ~ Written" 11/2/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet........
Miller Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 8:19 AM
Too funny Paula, congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, Too funny. It was so much fun to write. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Poet Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:58 AM
So funny, Paula, congratulations on your contest win, well-deserved.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, So funny. It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Very creative and humorous, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, Very creative and humorous. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Jones Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Thanks for stopping over with your support and Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme again. Great to see you back. Thanks... This was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away...................
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Haha. What a great end line
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. This was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away...................
Leake Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Nicely done Paula Enjoyed this with a funny ending Best wishes Kevin
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, Nicely done. Also glad you enjoyed my funny ending. It was so much of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
James Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Enjoyed your fun poem Paula. Made me smile and a clever ending. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 9:36 AM
 Thanks for stopping over with your support. Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme write. So glad it made you smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:25 AM
- :))) ... a funny ending ... thanks for the dance :) - Best wishes in the contest, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Also Thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, a funny ending. So glad you enjoyed. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Hugs... Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Edmonds  Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:55 PM
Very amusing Paula, gave me a laugh… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:04 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, Very amusing. So glad I gave you a laugh. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Canerdy Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Creative and funny, Paula! I enjoyed. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, Creative and funny. So glad you enjoyed this one. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:14 PM
loved the humorous end to this contest entry....brought a smile to my face :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you loved my fun and humorous end to "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. Also glad I gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Rose  Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 2:35 PM
lol I love Dijon but on bread not behind the ears, but heh theres no telling about people tastes, lol, gl in the contest dear
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Also Thanks for your, gl in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. Yes, great on a sandwich. This was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 1:32 PM
very nice Paula! A good smelling man for a change!! Worth a dance!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 12:53 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you found my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme to be, very nice. Yes, worth a dance wearing favorite mustard ~ Dijon. Hahaha!!!  It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Poet Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thank you for the entertaining piece! I also completed this one! I wish you the best of luck! May you be blessed!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 12:49 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. Also Thanks for your, best of luck. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Lol! Enjoyed your fun write! I did this one too! Good luck! And have a blessed Sunday!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks for stopping over with your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The Man In The Elevator" Rhyme. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. A blessed Sunday to you, enjoy it. Have a fun day as you go writing away..............
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:07 AM
"The Man In The Elevator"  Rhyme ~ Written" 11/2/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet........
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