The Man in the Elevator

The man in the elevator
just ate a very large tater,
but then had to pass
high doses of gas
to feel better sooner, not later.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 1:02 AM
lol funny! Best wishes in the contest Jim! I found this a difficult challenge but I managed.
Healey Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Thank you, Karen. It is indeed an interesting challenge! Hope all is well. Jim
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