The Man Behind the Mask

This is for the guy who thinks he's too imperfect,  for that girl who thinks she's not amazing enough...... You are stunning! 


I had a mask
Carefully carved for me by fear
I heard he got the best smiths for this task
Nothing else got much of my care

Never had I seen such a beauty
At first, it worked so much magic
Every guy wanted to be my buddy
Even the prettiest girls wanted something romantic

It started from my friends
They said the stone mask looked better
Siblings complained the jaw didn't have enough bend
Some even said the best masks were of terracotta 

So I bought every type I could find
Clay,wood, brass, steel... I had all
Like the arid sand obeys the most trivial wind
I succumbed to every call

Just while deep in thought
I realised how much of Fear's client I was
Too ashamed of the man behind the mask
That I tried to hide him from the world

I couldn't even recall the man
It had been long I checked him in the mirror
If he was still a boy or now a man
If he was still dark or now fairer

So in the middle of the night
I burnt the masks
To bring this man to Limelight
Like twilights in dusks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 29, 2016 at 12:39 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Olusanya. :)
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May 26, 2016 at 3:20 AM
olusanya daniel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Thanks so much.....i'd like to learn from you
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Thanks so much.....i'd like to learn from you
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May 26, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Interesting poem, Olusanya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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