The Man

I looked into
my surgeon soul
In there
I saw the reflection
of life

The yellow eyes
of jaundice
The fetid breath
of diabetes
The sickly smell
of gangrene

I looked again
The calm face
of death
The wet feel
of birth

If you don’t know
ask the leeches
swimming in the pool
of my blood

Ask the man
in the white shroud
waiting at the gate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/2/2017 10:42:00 AM
Your writing is lovely but difficult for a simple rhymer like myself to understand at times. However: I appreciate your sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:55:00 AM
Ah, you are a surgeon? My father was a doctor...I can relate to these images very much- he spoke of things like this...that is why there is so much humanness in your poems...you have " seen it all..." Brave expressions...I sense a religiosity here...( The Man=Jesus? The shroud...? Touching poem with a hint of desperation...)
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Not easy to meet a person ending their life. I like your way of writing, as your verses are short but very meaningful. Keep up informing us in a poetry way.
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Date: 8/1/2017 6:19:00 PM
This is an excellent short poem. Are you an Indian poet?
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