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The Man

I looked into my surgeon soul In there I saw the reflection of life The yellow eyes of jaundice The fetid breath of diabetes The sickly smell of gangrene I looked again The calm face of death The wet feel of birth If you don’t know ask the leeches swimming in the pool of my blood Ask the man in the white shroud waiting at the gate

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Date: 8/2/2017 10:42:00 AM
Your writing is lovely but difficult for a simple rhymer like myself to understand at times. However: I appreciate your sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:55:00 AM
Ah, you are a surgeon? My father was a doctor...I can relate to these images very much- he spoke of things like this...that is why there is so much humanness in your poems...you have " seen it all..." Brave expressions...I sense a religiosity here...( The Man=Jesus? The shroud...? Touching poem with a hint of desperation...)
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Not easy to meet a person ending their life. I like your way of writing, as your verses are short but very meaningful. Keep up informing us in a poetry way.
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Date: 8/1/2017 6:19:00 PM
This is an excellent short poem. Are you an Indian poet?
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