The Maltese Maiden

There was once a maiden who lived by the sea with lustrous lips that dried too soon like early dew perched on a tree . She once was beautiful with skin so fair A veil of lilacs covered her hair. Her eyes the brightest of moonglow beams Her voice, a drifting wave on a late night breeze. Her dimpled smile lit each dark alley Her carefree spirit reached every valley. This little maiden had never married though noble blood her womb has carried. Undressed from innocence, her tender flesh has felt the warmth of drunken breath. His fingertips exposed her neck and then trailed down along her back. She couldn't move, She couldn't scream At last, She ran not to be seen. She ran so fast to be set free She raised her son, lone by the sea.

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Date: 3/20/2016 9:11:00 PM
This is such a rare gem in the pearl but equally sad...!!!!!! I have read other poems too and I can say that you are one of the most talented poetess on Soup....7/7...hugs Red
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:53:00 PM
Uh oh--sorry to have l, but lve your poem just as mucheft an earlier comment
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Date: 1/24/2016 3:51:00 PM
Well. I for one would love you without drunken breath!! Memorable write.
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:32:00 PM
yes, agree-mini-epic comes to mind. Excellent write; much enjoyment!
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Date: 9/20/2015 3:59:00 PM
Wow...that is quite the write, dear. You have such a way with words as to draw us in from the title...down to the last line. It's a sad write....but I am with you, Charmaine. The child is not at fault and needs to live. Hugs, dear.
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Date: 9/17/2015 11:11:00 AM
A powerful piece written so delicately Charma, Very wisely put to warn others in the same situation!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:46:00 AM
When the beast overtakes the human horrendous crimes come to life and haunt the soul. Although the poem a fiction, the crime is real. My heart aces for those women who fell victims to the filthy appetites of these brutes. A majestic poem that captivates with its beauty and sensibility of expression, dear Charm!
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:29:00 PM
Of course, being Maltese it was the title that pulled me in to read this delightful yet sad poem. Rape and similar abuse are loathsome; you treated the subject with emotion and dignity, Charm. Top marks to you. // paul
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:28:00 PM
powerful pen illuminates golden piece charmaine
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:55:00 PM
ohh, lovely tale with mellow images, charms.. thanks also for your shares on my blog... huggs
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Date: 9/15/2015 12:56:00 PM
such vivid imagery Charma beautifully written but sad:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2015 10:13:00 PM
Sad but well written poem my friend. Beauty tempts the beast and the savage beast so often takes want it wants. Tragically that still happens today. Great poem.. A7
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:42:00 PM
Every maiden has a tempt to know, although you be sumptuous with attractive glow, a woman worthy for kiss of noble love. I love seeing you like this, irresistible, delicate yet strong in purpose. "Her tender flesh has felt the warmth of his drunken breath, his fingertips exposed her neck..." so savory be the touch Charma. Sometimes extreme beauty be curse...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:00:00 PM
This is so sad, but very beautifully written. Your imagery is so vivid and so heart wrenching. The reader can't help but empathize with the maiden and admire her strength. You have a way with words!
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:50:00 PM
It is so sad that a man would force himself on a woman. I can only imagine her horror. I am glad she was able to flee....big hugs Charma
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:49:00 PM
Glad to hear it is fiction, it definately captures the senses!
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:44:00 PM
An excellent poem that is dark and a little disturbing. I hope it is fiction dear.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2015 5:47:00 PM
Yes it is fiction, thanks for reading : )
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