The Makeover

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A poem about Americas choices

Have you had enough of childish lies and incompetent response? Have you bathed in toxic manhood until you long for nuance? Are we going to save this planet? Or will we all move somewhere else? Will we turn our eyes toward justice or become a failed police state? I propose a national "makeover" a new "US" to change our fate. You adults will have to do this - I only hope it's not too late.

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/14/2020 2:27:00 PM

It would first require Americans to actually do their own thinking instead of leaving it to a COVIDIOT! Aloha! Rico

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/14/2020 9:04:00 PM

True THAT - thanks Rico! =]

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/14/2020 2:17:00 PM

Succinct and no holds barred dear poetess. Hugs and hope from your northern neighbour, xomo

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/14/2020 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Pigeon Tart =]

James Long

Date: 7/14/2020 2:11:00 PM

there is a "Mighty Bridge" continuing on into and all throughout this very "Moment." Moving on in "Peace Infinitely!" "Stretching Out" from shore to shore "Rising Up" over the quiet lands, of our "Hate" of our "Love" "Rising Up" over the "Muddy Waters" of our "Indifference" "Towards" "These Efforts." This "Bridge" is the "Mighty Bridge" of "The Conscious and Continuous Journey" into the "Full Acceptance" of our "Creator" of "Ourselves" of "All Life" for just how this "Is" and "Can "All" Be" with "All" of us "Working Together" "Ever-Diligently" "With" our "Creator" and with "All Life" "Consistently" "Continuously, and "Ever-Patiently." Our "Mighty" and Ever-Generous "Creator" will "Meet, and "Greet" us, "Here!"

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/14/2020 9:06:00 PM

your poem is better than mine =]