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Majestic White Mountains surround me, I travel the curvy road They call this road the ‘Kanc’ for short, where panoramic views are sowed Green valley’s lay beneath me, with rivers in the ravines quite deep The slate gray rocky cliffs I pass by, look like murals, slopes are steep A patchwork of color blankets the far reaching, lush, mountainside Where white puffy clouds circulate around the top, floating to hide Amidst the pines, the clean air I breathe is cool, refreshing and clear I pass by turn out spots for viewing and hiking trails everywhere In the fall you will find the old man who sells apples at his stand Where you can try different kinds or buy some cider he has on hand In the winter, the snow paints the mountains and trees a shining white Where fallen flakes and ice crystalize everything there is in sight The State Forest is nearby where people visit, the wildlife roam I view all this with gratitude, to live where mountains are my home Heidi Sands 8/9/17 *Placed 4th in the contest: Mountains

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Date: 8/18/2017 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Heidi.
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Date: 8/18/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 8/18/2017 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Heidi, lovely imagery ~*
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Date: 8/18/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 8/17/2017 4:25:00 PM
Heidi, a lovely poem to share. Congratulations on your placement of this worthy entry. ~ Sonia
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Sonia :)
Date: 8/17/2017 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this beauty deservedly high on the list of winners Heidi. : )
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 8/16/2017 7:55:00 AM
WELL DONE, Heidi!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin :)
Date: 8/16/2017 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Heidi!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 8/16/2017 6:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 8/16/2017 3:29:00 AM
I have hiked and skied those mountains many times, and they are gorgeous, as is this beautiful poem - congratulations, my friend, on this deserved win! :-)
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:33:00 AM
They certainly are gorgeous. That is great you have enjoyed them! Thank you :)
Date: 8/10/2017 12:11:00 PM
Just lovely Heidi, good luck :)
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Date: 8/10/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you Gary :)
Date: 8/10/2017 11:09:00 AM
This is so pretty Heidi! So smooth to read and interesting. The rhyme is very natural too. Nice job with this sonnet! -- Dean
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Date: 8/10/2017 11:48:00 AM
Hi Dean I am happy you like this one! Thank you for your positive feedback on this :) Have a nice day!
Date: 8/10/2017 9:48:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Heidi ! Good luck :)
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Date: 8/10/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Lenna :)
Date: 8/10/2017 9:23:00 AM
A beautiful picture painted with words, It echoes a breath of tranquillity - Nice Write Heidi
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Date: 8/10/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your comment on this :)
Date: 8/10/2017 4:46:00 AM
I agree with Susan, this is such a picturesque write, I love it! The mountains are so majestic and are proud as they loom above us all, nothing is greater! I surely loved reading your awesome piece this morning, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/10/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Russell :)
Date: 8/9/2017 11:24:00 PM
Hi Heidi, a very picturesque and lovely write. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 8/10/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Susan :)
Date: 8/9/2017 11:15:00 PM
Sounds like a beautiful place to live, breathe and be; well penned, Heidi.
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Date: 8/10/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you M.L. It really is :)
Date: 8/9/2017 9:06:00 PM
I picture the mountains you describe. You work so fast.. the words must come naturally. Good luck Heidi for the contest!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 7:05:00 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you. Yes, I do work fast sometimes. This one was a bit rushed as well, at the end of the day yesterday :)
Date: 8/9/2017 8:34:00 PM
So vividly versified ... Lovely ... Btw, thanks for liking my Quintain ...
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Date: 8/10/2017 7:04:00 AM
Hi Probir. Thank you :)
Date: 8/9/2017 8:20:00 PM
A beautiful serene place you have described...good luck in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Frederic :)
Date: 8/9/2017 7:40:00 PM
Beautiful write Heidi...the mountains are quite majestic...Best wishes in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 7:59:00 PM
Thank you , Joseph :)

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