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The Majestic White Mountains

Majestic White Mountains surround me, I travel the curvy road
They call this road the ‘Kanc’ for short, where panoramic views are sowed
Green valley’s lay beneath me, with rivers in the ravines quite deep
The slate gray rocky cliffs I pass by, look like murals, slopes are steep

A patchwork of color blankets the far reaching, lush, mountainside
Where white puffy clouds circulate around the top, floating to hide
Amidst the pines, the clean air I breathe is cool, refreshing and clear
I pass by turn out spots for viewing and hiking trails everywhere

In the fall you will find the old man who sells apples at his stand
Where you can try different kinds or buy some cider he has on hand
In the winter, the snow paints the mountains and trees a shining white
Where fallen flakes and ice crystalize everything there is in sight

The State Forest is nearby where people visit, the wildlife roam
I view all this with gratitude, to live where mountains are my home

Heidi Sands

8/9/17

*Placed 4th in the contest:  Mountains
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:29 AM
Congratulations on your win, Heidi, lovely imagery ~*
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Walker Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Heidi, a lovely poem to share. Congratulations on your placement of this worthy entry. ~ Sonia
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thank you very much Sonia :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Congratulations on this beauty deservedly high on the list of winners Heidi. : )
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:51 AM
Thank you Connie :)
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:55 AM
WELL DONE, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Thank you so much Lin :)
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Congrats Heidi!
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
May Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Barden Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 3:29 AM
I have hiked and skied those mountains many times, and they are gorgeous, as is this beautiful poem - congratulations, my friend, on this deserved win! :-)
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:33 AM
They certainly are gorgeous. That is great you have enjoyed them! Thank you :)
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Just lovely Heidi, good luck :)
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Gary :)
Wood Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:09 AM
This is so pretty Heidi! So smooth to read and interesting. The rhyme is very natural too. Nice job with this sonnet! -- Dean
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Hi Dean I am happy you like this one! Thank you for your positive feedback on this :) Have a nice day!
Walker Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Absolutely beautiful Heidi ! Good luck :)
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, Lenna :)
Bell Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 9:23 AM
A beautiful picture painted with words, It echoes a breath of tranquillity - Nice Write Heidi
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your comment on this :)
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:46 AM
I agree with Susan, this is such a picturesque write, I love it! The mountains are so majestic and are proud as they loom above us all, nothing is greater! I surely loved reading your awesome piece this morning, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Russell :)
Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Hi Heidi, a very picturesque and lovely write. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest:)
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Thank you, Susan :)
Kiser Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Sounds like a beautiful place to live, breathe and be; well penned, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Thank you M.L. It really is :)
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:06 PM
I picture the mountains you describe. You work so fast.. the words must come naturally. Good luck Heidi for the contest!
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Hi Vijay. Thank you. Yes, I do work fast sometimes. This one was a bit rushed as well, at the end of the day yesterday :)
Gupta Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:34 PM
So vividly versified ... Lovely ... Btw, thanks for liking my Quintain ...
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Hi Probir. Thank you :)
Parker Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM
A beautiful serene place you have described...good luck in the contest
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Frederic :)
May Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Beautiful write Heidi...the mountains are quite majestic...Best wishes in the contest
Sands Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Thank you , Joseph :)
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