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I was walking on a green field when a cyclone came and picked me up, He wrapped me in dark whirlwind, so I screamed that no one could ever stop; When he was annoyed, he dropped me somewhere, In front of a laughing pixie who was as big as my toy teddy bear. I stood up and cringed just like my cute Dalmatian puppy, Until I realized I’m in front of the world’s most gigantic tree; The pixie stepped into a huge trunk door and he invited me inside, My fear relented…”So, what can I do for you?” I cried. He took his pair of chopsticks and lit them like magical firecrackers, “My little girl-a green lover, come … I’ll show you the world’s best wonder” A silver silky carpet suddenly laid in front of me, And we walked along together on a long avenue of green trees. I was deeply fascinated by the splendid view zooming at my sight, In different hues of green trees with their colorful flowers so bright; Heavily laden with fruits, lauded by the triumphant songs of nesting birds, It was already the sweetest and the most beautiful music I've ever heard. As I wondered around in gape, cold breeze hugged and kissed my rosy cheeks, Suddenly, the pixie turned into a green bird preening itself with its red beak; While perching on my shoulder, we headed off to crystallized springs and waterfalls, Lovely maidens were bathing there… I heard their melodious songs and calls. I could not almost believe on what I’ve seen… A true paradise with angels’ scents and heaven’s scene; As I sat on green grasses to watch them, I still looked around, I saw a big stone in green molds, engraved : Paddy’s Day Is All Around. All insects in kaleidoscopic colors hovered above me, When one of the maidens pointed at me, I was dressed like a little fairy; She beckoned and said, “Come my sweet girl, please join us and be happy”, I smiled as I saw the sunlight dancing through the forest windows -so gaily. Oh, how wonderful to be in a magical green forest! Where undomesticated animals were even tamed in my white dress; Small creatures danced in pairs on clover leaves and on Bermuda grasses, And the monkeys and rodents ran and swung on those lively branches. I jumped and turned around with my beautiful dress in extreme joy, I wished it was real and I thanked the pixie who was as big as my toy, After a while, I felt someone shaking me, screaming, “Sissy wake up!” ‘Twas my li’l brother inviting me to plant trees while the sun was still up.
©2014by Leonora Galinta March 22,2014 10.15pm Second Place Contest: Green Judged: 3/31/2014 Sponsor: My greatest poet PD

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Date: 9/15/2014 7:29:00 AM
A most creative write!! Was a pleasure to read and brought back memories for me of when I once made up bedtime stories about , fairies, dragons, evil witches and the like for my daughter when she was a young child. She now does that for her young son and tells me it meant the world to her when I did it.
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:37:00 PM
This is outstanding my friend and so deserving of your wonderful win!
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/13/2014 11:13:00 AM
Thank u so much my dear friend Connie. Big hugs!
Date: 4/5/2014 3:51:00 PM
May I tell everyone that I also wrote this poem as a declamation piece for kids. I wrote this for my niece who loves reciting poems aloud with feelings like crying, laughing etc:))))))) Thanks u sooo much for a very wonderful contest of my forever loving sis & BFF Linda that inspired me to compose this poem/story. Biggest hugs to all! Happy weekend!
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Date: 4/1/2014 11:22:00 PM
You are very creative my dear friend.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:32:00 PM
Thank u so much again my dearest/loving sis & friend Skat! That's another very uplifting compliments from u! Forever thanking u for all your encouragements, inspirations, support & everything! You're very creative as well my lovely friend & sis & so with the rests here -the reason I know why we're all here. TYSM! More blessings! Biggest hugs!
Date: 4/1/2014 5:39:00 PM
Such a magic dream. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:33:00 PM
Thank u so much my dear friend Joyce. Big hugs!
Date: 4/1/2014 2:29:00 AM
Love you forest... congratulations Love xx
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:34:00 PM
I love u too & everyone here my dear friend Mandy. Thank u so much! Big hugs!
Date: 4/1/2014 1:52:00 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, leonora
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thank u so much my dear friend Dr. Ram! Big hugs!
Date: 3/31/2014 9:33:00 PM
HI SWEET SISTER... CONGRATULATIONS..... SENDING HUGS.... LOVE THE POEM... FOREVER YOUR BFF..... LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:47:00 PM
By the way, my loving sis, I enjoyed so much your contest. TYTYSM! I forgot to tell you that I also created/composed this poem for a declamation piece of my loving 11-year old niece. She loves declaiming or reciting poems aloud with action & feelings. TYTYSSSM!
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:38:00 PM
Hello my sweet and forever loving sis! Thank u, thank u soo much for loving my poem & my placement. Biggest hugs! love lots your forever sis & BFF, Leonora
Date: 3/29/2014 10:45:00 AM
Hi Leonora; I really enjoyed this Magical forest poem very much. Great imagination. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:42:00 PM
I'm so happy to know you also enjoyed my poem my dear friend Lucilla. Yeah, this is just an imagination. In fact, I wrote this for a declamation piece of my niece. You're welcome my dear friend. Always take care. love u! I'll visit your page soon. Big hugs!
Date: 3/29/2014 10:04:00 AM
A wonderful magical poem you have penned Leonora. love phyl
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thank u again ever so much for your lovely comments & for enjoying my poems my dear friend Phyllis. Now, it's easy for me to go to your page. I'll be there again soon. tcare!
Date: 3/23/2014 6:42:00 PM
It's a great effort and a deeply sensitive poem, enjoyed very much. btw, thanks a lot for the placement my poem got in your contest, dear friend, Leonora!!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/23/2014 10:59:00 PM
You're welcome my dear friend S.J. Thank u so much as well for the nice comment. Hugs!
Date: 3/23/2014 6:30:00 AM
gorgeous and lovely Leonora a magical pen hugs
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:00:00 PM
Thank u so much my dear friend Shadow. Hugs!
Date: 3/22/2014 11:45:00 PM
Leonora, so much beauty, a new life waiting to blossom. Love the ending. SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:01:00 PM
Thank u so much my loving poet sis & friend Skat! Hugs!
Date: 3/22/2014 10:00:00 PM
You care so much for all of nature, I can see it written within your write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this dynamic poem, full of awesome life, you are so creative Leonora! Is this for Linda's contest, it feels like it is! It will do well if it is for the contest! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thank u so much again for your lovely comments my dear friend Russell! Hugs!
Date: 3/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
A sweet sounding poem. Love' SandyIvy
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:06:00 PM
Hi my very dear friend and libramate Sandy! Big hugs! I'm so so glad to see u around and thank u so much for your precious time stopping by, leaving me lovely comments on my poem. How are u? Hope you're doing fine always. Missed u. TYSM again. Hugs, hugs, hugs!
Date: 3/22/2014 4:31:00 PM
- One of your pearls, dear Leonora ..... a fantastik great way to tell in the poem form!! - Now I will read it again ....:)) - Good luck in the contet .... no doubt it will win!! - A big warm hug with desire for a peaceful weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:08:00 PM
TYTYSM again my very dear friend Anne Lise! Hugs!
Date: 3/22/2014 2:15:00 PM
Gosh, this is so bright and colorful and had many images of St. Patrick's Day too. A magical entry for the contest. You have a vivid imagination, Leonora. You will make a good mommy story teller one day!!
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/23/2014 11:17:00 PM
Thank u so much for the lovely comments my dear friend! Hugs!
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Date: 3/23/2014 11:15:00 PM
:)))))This was one of the most effective ways to calm down kids who fidgeted a lot in the classroom most of the time my dear frriend Andrea.I'll just create stories to make them imagine and shut their mouth then fold their arms LOL;)))))

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