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Author's Notes: This new Imagism poem on "The Magical Epiphany of an Old Rusted Can," for me, turned out to be a very unique and transformational type of write. I did spend some quality time really thinking about the physical description of this Old Rusted Can, and how I wanted to portray it in an ethereal sense as a magical object of sorts. The key takeaway in this particular theme is predicated upon the kaleidoscopic light-show and the effect it (i.e., the Old Rusted Can) produces as its unique series of holes or apertures are bathed throughout in the bright morning sunlight. The notion is that this brief magical light-show actually creates the image of an aura of enchantment by which the protagonist in the poem begins to feel the true divine presence of Almighty God Himself. Enjoy this magical epiphany!! (Gary Bateman - August 21, 2018) (Imagism)

Thematic Categories: allegory, god, imagery, inspiration, magic, metaphor, and symbolism.

The Magical Epiphany of an Old Rusted Can whilst out hiking one day in a countryside area that was quite desolate and remote from any nearby city, I discovered, amazingly, an Old Rusted Can that was at least two-liter-sized and was partially-buried in a long dried-out river bed in the middle of nowhere this Old Rusted Can protruded out upright at about a twenty-degree right-slant with some jagged-edges all along its circular lip its striking physical presence and the way in which it was positioned, still partially-filled with dried river sediment, for me, bespoke some sort of an old artifact of sorts, yet it was the only object like it right in the middle of this long dried-out river bed its unique silhouette was, at once, quite discernable at a distance on the horizon as it casted a very curious and most soulful shadow under the limitless canopy of the late-morning sunlight although it was very rusted, this Old Can actually reflected radiant light rays at various times when it was touched by the rays of the bright sunlight as it ascended to its customary cosmic dominance in the late-morning sky it also had five certain hole punctures located front and back, in its upper-area, from whence the bright sunlight reckoned a kaleidoscopic effect of sorts as the sunlight touched and passed through each of these unique apertures that were arrayed on this Old Rusted Can inelegant as this Old Rusted Can was—this unexpected and most unusual light-show lasted for several minutes until the darkened clouds overhead blocked out all of the bright sunlight for the rest of the morning yet, I just couldn’t help but feel the true divine presence of Almighty God Himself—as I had fervently focused on every aspect and precise detail of this radiant and very unusual light-show which presented a magical sense and aura of empyrean enchantment and whilst I continued my deep gaze at this Old Rusted Can, I was simultaneously and singularly transfixed by the utter majesty and true joy of the holy epiphany it had presented to me. I thought for a moment . . . God does indeed, relate to us, at times, in very mysterious ways! Amen! Amen! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved August 21, 2018 (Imagism)

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Date: 8/26/2018 2:27:00 PM
Great storytelling... Your words most certainly created an image..
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/27/2018 4:30:00 AM
Hello Silent, Thanks for you read and great observation here. Great storytelling and credible imagery are very key indeed as you've noted. I'm planning to do more of these Imagism writes in the future as time permits. Hope all is well on your end!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 8/23/2018 8:02:00 AM
"most unusual light-show lasted for several minutes". Beautifully penned. I can see the colors, scoping in the light. Yep, God does relate in specific ways to us all...what I like best. Thanks for the wonderful, artistic read.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 8/23/2018 3:13:00 PM
Hello MLK, Very pleased to see that you took a read of my Old Rusted Can verse here. I actually had this idea for a while about doing an imagism write on some peculiar object -- like in this instance, an old rusted can. Sometimes poets are not sure what direction a theme will go in this instance. I decided to go with the divine presence option. This one did exceed, in the end, my initial expectations. Cheers and Best, Gary

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