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The Magic Tree

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 It has been there for ages, perhaps older than anybody alive. Radiating dignified peace, it stands enveloping everything under it in a cocoon of soothing shade. A patient listener whom I consider my companion. On lazy noon, I'd weave uncharted territories on paper to bury in parched trunk. With numerous thoughts I couldn't share with others, I had bubbles of exuberant stories to be narrated. It swayed lush green branches and dropped a few leaves in appreciation. A young thinker humming to serene tunes of cooing wind on starry nights would teleport me to a sphere of leaves sparkling with coloured dreams. Over the years, the pile of buried pages from my memories, fears, experiences, years simmered into the roots of that old tree. It stayed patient witnessing my journey, shedding agony with withered leaves in autumn, buried under layers of winter snow, reborn every spring. From crumbles of my old struggles, figments of my journey, drops of patience nurtured it to my essence. The tree now lives as my legend, hope rising from legacy of showers that drench spirit in soaring ecstasy. The leaves fly afar, spreading through blue rivulets, blooming orchards and sing of a lonely tree that grew in a barren land with courage, turning struggles into elixir for leaves, a newfound freedom for memories to live on. August 30, 2020 All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/10/2020 2:48:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem and a tree tooooo. You are just tooooo good. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Date: 9/4/2020 11:13:00 AM
- The tree of life , Aditi :) - I can see it with my own eyes ... a place to find peace ... beautiful when it blooms in the spring :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:24:00 PM
You sure have a gift, Aditi. Another fine example of your ability to craft a meaningful and aesthetic beauty out of words. God bless ~ John
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Date: 9/3/2020 4:40:00 PM
Hi Aditi. A fabulously constructed poem. Delves in to the significance of this place to you. Written with touching flair, as you do so well. I'm a fan of the more direct style you employed with this. If it's not at no. 1, - whose rat cares??? I think your reward is far truer. A heartfelt tribute to the tree and how you allowed it to assist you.
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Date: 8/30/2020 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful verse Aditi, love the shape too, I bet trees could tell many stories if they could talk. Good luck in the contest Tom
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