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The Magic Tree

          
 "Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces"

                                           John Ruskin, 1853


                     It has been there for ages,
                perhaps older than anybody alive.
               Radiating dignified peace, it stands
           enveloping everything under it in a cocoon
         of soothing shade. A patient listener whom I
       consider my companion. On lazy noon, I'd weave
      uncharted territories on paper to bury in parched trunk.
     With numerous thoughts I couldn't share with others,
     I had bubbles of exuberant stories to be narrated. It
     swayed lush green branches and dropped a few leaves in
      appreciation. A young thinker humming to serene tunes 
       of cooing wind on starry nights would teleport me to
        a sphere of leaves sparkling with coloured dreams.
        Over the years, the pile of buried pages from my
         memories, fears, experiences, years simmered 
           into the roots of that old tree. It stayed
            patient witnessing my journey, shedding 
             agony with withered leaves in autumn,
                buried under layers of winter snow,
                          reborn every spring.
                            From crumbles of 
                            my old struggles,
                             figments of my
                             journey, drops
                              of patience 
                              nurtured it 
                             to my essence.
                             The tree now
                              lives as my
                             legend, hope
                             rising from
                              legacy of
                              showers
                       that drench spirit
                    in soaring ecstasy. The
                   leaves fly afar, spreading 
               through  blue rivulets,    blooming
            orchards     and sing of      a lonely tree
        that grew in   a barren land      with courage,
     turning            struggles into        elixir for leaves,
  a newfound         freedom for          memories to live on.


August 30, 2020

All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/10/2020 2:48:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/poem and a tree tooooo. You are just tooooo good. Enjoy your win and day.................
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Date: 9/4/2020 11:13:00 AM
- The tree of life , Aditi :) - I can see it with my own eyes ... a place to find peace ... beautiful when it blooms in the spring :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2020 10:24:00 PM
You sure have a gift, Aditi. Another fine example of your ability to craft a meaningful and aesthetic beauty out of words. God bless ~ John
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Date: 9/3/2020 4:40:00 PM
Hi Aditi. A fabulously constructed poem. Delves in to the significance of this place to you. Written with touching flair, as you do so well. I'm a fan of the more direct style you employed with this. If it's not at no. 1, - whose rat cares??? I think your reward is far truer. A heartfelt tribute to the tree and how you allowed it to assist you.
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Date: 8/30/2020 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful verse Aditi, love the shape too, I bet trees could tell many stories if they could talk. Good luck in the contest Tom
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