Panagiota Romios Poet Alliteration

The Magic of Mimosa

The magic of mimosa meandered,
In her mystical mind and on the mirror.
Mesmerizing moments of men!

With mannish kindness they kissed her hands 
and dainty, debutante fingers
Masculine too, having merciful manners

Musicality and poetry, a mighty mix.
The moon shed musical tunes midst the mimosa.
Moving down sweet memoir’s corridors.
To waltz, in mighty halls, with golden etched walls.


           
                     12/4/2022

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Bill Baker January 7, 2022 at 10:17 PM Loved the imagery and alliteration, Pangie. Nice memories of tenderness and love. Hope you're doing well. Your friend, Bill Hugs Panagiota Romios January 8, 2022 at 4:10 AM So, so glad you liked this! Me, too I wrote a poem...YIKES, Mountain MIKE. THAT IS AN UPDATE ON HOW things are going. Too slow for me. A broken bone and muscles take forever...in my case.I am upset tonight! Love, Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw January 5, 2022 at 2:19 PM Masterfully woven into a beautiful verse, Pangie. Bob H Panagiota Romios January 6, 2022 at 11:05 AM Hello Bob.yesterday was rough, sorry. I did the best I could on this...thank you so much. Pangie xo

Joseph P. DiMino January 5, 2022 at 5:09 AM For me, the power of this work is mystical -- the word itself, Mimosa! The images of vines that react to touch; of hynotic scent and taste -- stars making spiritual constellations. Love it! Panagiota Romios January 6, 2022 at 11:03 AM Joe, your comment is brilliant! I do love what you saw in the poem. Thank you,so very much. Pangie

Ann Gilmour January 4, 2022 at 9:25 PM Lovely imagery weaving your poetic words in this very clever alliteration dear Panagiota. I loved it my friend... hugs Ann xx Panagiota Romios January 4, 2022 at 11:12 PM I know you mean-that, Ann! That’s the best part ,..thank you for all the surprises at cheering me up! You go beyond comments. You taught me a valuable Lesson. Wish we were at Beachy ahead, Love you Pangie. This is my tw month anniversary sconce surgery.l.