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The Magic Feast

I saw magical faeries. 
Tripping in and around
Sparkling wings shining 
In the dazzling sunbeams
That transversally filtered
Through the mighty beeches
Of a Bavarian forest.

A royal feast proclaimed.
The mighty Queen arrived.
And took her place on a throne
In a prominent part of the glen.
Sumptuous abundant delicacies 
Appeared out of nowhere,
Cheeses and pixie pears,
And saffron flavoured cakes,
Plus, milk laced with honey.

Enchanting lively music 
Advanced towards the glen.
Happiness and Felicity
Thrilled the expectant audience.
Soon, darkness fell around, 
But innumerable, bright glow worms
Lit up the secluded grassy glen.
Dancing thus began in earnest.
Until they tired out and all returned
To their cosy leaves to dream
About their lovely Fairy Queen.
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April 5, 2025 at 6:58 AM
Victor, you immersed us in a delightful fairy tale, indulging in milk, honey, and several enjoyable experiences while observing the Queen. Charming and romantic, in addition to being an opulent banquet, and visually stunning.
DiMino Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Wonderful imagery, Victor; delightful fantasy. Quite a vivid imagination you have been blessed with. Thank you for sharing.
Gentile Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:29 AM
This visit to a magical world was indeed a beautiful respite from the chaos of life! It sounds a wonderful party and I would love to see it! Happy Saturday Victor!
Tor Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:59 AM
Lovely Victor you put us in a wonderful fairy tale experiencing milk honey, and all sorts of fun things to enjoy while watching the Queen. The mysteries of the forest are so many if you only knew in real life you wouldn't believe them all... Hope you are well my friend...
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 12:57 AM
Simply beautiful Victor!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:14 PM
Indeed a magical fairy tale
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:57 AM
WOW!!! What a creative write and pretty picture you have here. Love It... Have a lovely/fun day writing away...........
Godwin Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:25 AM
You are too advanced in years to do LSD - don't make me come there!!! On a serious note, you take the reader through marvelous views and feels ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:32 AM
Delightful and romantic, as well as a sumptuous feast and beautiful!!!!
Rolland Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 3:53 PM
an enchanting poem ( your words), sounds talented and magical, enjoyed dear poet
Buehler Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 3:51 PM
The feast was magical, and so was the telling of this tale, Victor. Very pleasant reading! :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Quite an enchanting read Victor, love the imagery in your verse. Tom
Read Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Hi Victor you certainly know how to weave your magic, have a lovely day dear friend.
Gifford Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Hello Victor, this is so beautifully magical. A great write and an enjoyable read. Loved the picture too. Enjoy your day and have a wonderful weekend,my friend.
Williams Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Dear Victor,your poem is absolutely enchanting! The imagery is so vivid—I could almost see the faeries twirling in the sunbeams and taste the honey-laced milk. It feels like stepping into a secret, magical world hidden deep in the forest. Such a delightful and whimsical piece! A fave for me...Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Hugs returned.
Rodgers Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Dear Victor, Oh, pure enchantment with a shimmering portal into a magical Bavarian glen. I love the imagery of faeries, royal feasts, and glowing wings which feels alive, like a dream unfolding in sunlight and shadow. Your words transport me to a world of wonder and joy, where the forest hums with ancient magic. A wonderful spellbinding glimpse into your imagination! Spring Blessings, My Dear Victor, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Ahhh!! magical indeed, Victor. I wonder how it would be accepted to have a queen like that one. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
George Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:11 AM
You have indeed created a magical atmosphere. The sumptuous feast arranged in honor of the Fairy Queen sounds so inviting. Your imagination is in top gear, dear Victor.
Sands Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:07 AM
This is so sweet and joyful. I enjoyed this great poem :)
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 3:12 AM
- How beautiful and exciting, Victor ...would like to see them :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 3:07 AM
The poem so enchanting.Delighted (my mind)to be there for while.
Empress Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 2:44 AM
Awn this is so beautiful and magical! I absolutely love everything about this, the flow, word choices and mystical nature of your lines and the picture too! So this will go into my faves dear victor! What a brilliant and magical write! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
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April 3, 2025 at 2:39 AM
A beautiful magical feast it was Victor, it’s what dreams are made of… Beryl
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