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The Magi

* Star Rises In the east, The three magi, Scholars from afar Follow its guiding light Over hills and through deserts To a small town called Bethlehem, There pay homage to the new born king Bearing gifts of gold, frankincense and myrrh.
Written 22nd December 2020. Wishing everyone a merry Christmas or (happy holidays) and a better new year for us all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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George Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Beautiful poem, so well structured !
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 10:57 PM
Thank you very much Valsa I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
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February 22, 2021 at 5:50 AM
I missed this one somehow. A late Christmas wish is enjoyed in February. They are saying now that we might still be wearing masks into 2022. I am not happy about that. I hope they get more vaccinations out so that we all can be safe from getting sick. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much Sara, Christmas seems such a long time ago now. I think the way things are going we can write this year off too. Hope you're well. Tom
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:21 PM
+ Fav Poem! :)
Smith Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 3:04 PM
:-)
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Thank you very much for the fave Michelle, Tom
Fowler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:00 AM
A lovely write in a beautiful form Tom. Very well done! Linda
Cunningham Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thank you very much Linda, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
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January 2, 2021 at 1:50 PM
"Love This" This would make a wonderful Christmas card for next year. "Happy New Year 2021" Today, have joy/blessings..............
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Thank you very much Paula, I hope you are keeping well. Happy New year to you. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 5:17 PM
very lovely. I do really enjoy this form and its pleasing pattern when it's centered.
Cunningham Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 1:39 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, im happy that you enjoyed it. Happy New year to you. Tom
Watt Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 11:42 PM
Beautiful re-telling of the magi story, Tom, in exquisite etheree form. I liked the star you put at the top as well. Happy New Year to you and yours ~ John
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 2:47 AM
Thank you very much John, I cant believe its now behind us, dispite the restrictions we still had a great time, I hope you did too. Happy New year to you and your family too. Tom
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December 24, 2020 at 12:29 PM
A very nicely written ethereal, Tom, the perfect poem to read on Christmas Eve. Merry Christmas to you and your family. John
Cunningham Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Thank you very much John, and I wish you and your loved ones the same. Tom
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December 24, 2020 at 2:21 AM
Well, that makes me look a right ’nana. I actually thought the magi was something out of Star Wars... In my defence, I never studied religion in any great depth. So, nice poem, Tom, and I shall consider myself slightly better educated. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 2:48 AM
Lol, thank you Terry, may the force of christmas be with you. Hope alls well. Tom
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December 23, 2020 at 8:52 AM
A Magnificent Etheree Tom, love how you put the star above the tree of words. Merry Christmas and a Happy, Healthy New Year. Belle
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Thank you very much Belle, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
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December 23, 2020 at 5:13 AM
WoW! Tom, You told the birth of Jesus so well in the Etheree form. Excellent job! Merry Christmas:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, I hope you too have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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December 23, 2020 at 4:16 AM
Pleasing to the eye and the heart , my dearest friend, Tom. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! Blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, and I wish you too a merry Christmas and a happy and healthy New year.
Wolf Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Nicely done, Tom. Magical Moments, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 2:32 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, hope you have a relaxing few days with your family and good health and happiness in 2021. Tom
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December 22, 2020 at 11:50 AM
And to think that this phenomena took place on 21 December 2020 again. ~~
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Victor, sadly we had too much cloud and I missed it. Hope you have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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December 22, 2020 at 8:44 AM
I love it, Tom. Creative, simple and unafraid to express your faith. Bravo! Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, the Christmas story in a few lines but its what it's all about. Tom
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December 22, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Beautiful. Merry Christmas to you. Did you see the Bethlehem star last night? I did!!!
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Thought Im sure I'd answered a comment from you earlier and i had lol. See below.
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Regina, merry Christmas to you too, sadly it was too cloudy so didn't get to see it. Tom
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December 22, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Beautiful. Merry Christmas to you. Did you see the Bethlehem star last night? I did!!!
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Thank you Regina, our sky was clouded over so didnt get to see it. Tom
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December 22, 2020 at 5:17 AM
A faithful dedication to the new born king, Tom. Wishing you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Cunningham Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, despite all the restrictions I hope you have a wonderful time with your family. Tom
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