Get Your Premium Membership

The Magdalene

I have this urge to sway on street corners in a derelict way, disheveled, a little drunk, an impulse to praise Mary, not the Virgin, but her less immaculate namesake. 'Hail Mary, full of grace, Our Lord is with you.' Perhaps the sound of my voice will de-ice parked cars, straighten shopping cartwheels, save a kid's balloon from escaping? 'Blessed are you among women, And blessed the fruit of your womb.' The fruit of your womb goes downtown. A truck narrowly misses a cat. A door is held open for an expectant mother. A smile from a mean looking youth. It begins to rain. Snow turns to slush. The winter evening slaps our cheeks. 'Pray for us sinners.' A handcuffed Magdalene steps into a police cruiser. The cops are smiling. She is smiling. They have done this before. 'Now and at the hour of our death.' An old man in a thin jacket huddles cold bones against a wolfish wind. He will arrive, survive these killing teeth. It is Happy Hour. The Magdalene will be serving, tending in her own way, to good company and bad. 'Our Lord is with you'. ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/12/2019 9:23:00 AM
I like how the two stories are interwoven into a single fabric. I wrote a piece titled “Confessional” I think you might appreciate it.
Login to Reply
Ashford Avatar
Eric Ashford
Date: 8/12/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Richard, will look for it.
Date: 8/9/2019 8:47:00 AM
Hey Jude (always wanted to say that for real), Thanks for the close read and review. Yes to your comments, however, there are other ways to see Mary Magdalene. Check out some of the Gnostic tracts. Anyway, she was quite a gal.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/9/2019 1:55:00 AM
I'd imagine Magdalene would know a thing or two about turning a life around. Probably seen a few things. Learned to be a loyal and good lady. In my estimation. I don't blame her for taking suckers for a ride. If they want to pay a Kings ransom for Her beauty, so be it. But she showed where her true beauty lay. An inspiration.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/8/2019 1:03:00 PM
I read your poem with full responsibility and the first thing that came to my mind is handkerchief. I checked the internet. I got the correct spelling.
Login to Reply
Ferdous Avatar
Tamanna Ferdous
Date: 8/8/2019 3:00:00 PM
Please be informed that I will.
Ashford Avatar
Eric Ashford
Date: 8/8/2019 2:37:00 PM
Not sure how to respond to this Tamanna, but anyway, have a great 'handkerchief day. Did you know that the earliest known use of the word 'handkerchief' was in 1530. A lot of snot-rags have been employed since then I bet.
Date: 8/8/2019 12:55:00 PM
This made me smile. Thank you! xomo
Login to Reply
Ashford Avatar
Eric Ashford
Date: 8/8/2019 2:31:00 PM
You're very welcome Maureen.

Book: Shattered Sighs