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The Mad Parade

millions of faces pass me by like soft white milken ghost aimlessly they wander in gypsy vagabond night so enslaved lost in the mad parade of society just working in this rhetorical pantomime to pay debts of mortgage rent or fancy attire gold infused chariots that are just destine to rust and mansions that are destine to rot and this flesh turning to dust into this insane karmic merry go round here we go l.w. russell (c) 2013

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Date: 7/13/2013 6:42:00 PM
hi Lioyd, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, deep with distance.. I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:38:00 AM
-Hi, Lloyd. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2013 4:41:00 AM
Well written poem on the "merry go round" of this crazy, materialistic existence we call life. Indeed, one day we will all be dust, as our Spirits are lifted into Gods peace and love.
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Date: 7/12/2013 11:13:00 PM
LLoyd, the poem and imagery sounds like fun-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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