The Luck of the Irish

A leprechaun looking for gold
'neath the shimmering shamrocks of olde
      (with the luck of a Gael)
      found ten bottles of ale
somewhat green as if covered with mould.

3/15/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/21/2020 4:52:00 AM
Interesting topic. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in this one. Enjoyed reading your work this morning. Sara
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Date: 8/12/2020 7:03:00 AM
"That poor Leprechaun dressed-up in green : Had happened on a vacant sheebeen : Where the patrons can't smoke: So, they all took to Coke: They're so high that they cannot be seen: - You have an excellent ability to rhyme , á cára , Well done with your funnies also. Seán .
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Date: 4/24/2019 2:46:00 PM
Hello Terry O'Leary, I am thinking that the Irish had bad luck. It must be the luck of the Irish. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:05:00 PM
Very good. Obviously not Kiwi ale. That always goes straight down the hatch and guaranteed mould free. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 10/26/2018 10:53:00 AM
Sounds like a recipe for "Golder's Green," if you're familiar with that section of London, England! Nice limerick! ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/1/2018 4:46:00 PM
Just the way Leprechauns like it. Love it! Great write!
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:34:00 AM
So many trinkets in this beauty!
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Date: 4/24/2017 1:36:00 PM
as if i could see the leprechaun - in his green all about the hills
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Date: 4/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
You got me laughing with this one! So, we know that some mold can make us sick, but when it's green it has to be good.
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:33:00 AM
Not sure luck was involved! Great Limerick Terry and congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:32:00 AM
Now I know what's at the end of the rainbow! Worth the trek ... Nice job, enjoyed it, Dave
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:19:00 PM
Great job, Terry. And are you Irish? Sure seems like it by your last name!!
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:36:00 AM
It sure was his lucky day Terry! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Terry.
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Date: 4/7/2017 6:29:00 AM
Not a bad day's find ;) Congrats, Terry! I am only an honorary Irishman through my kids.
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Date: 3/26/2017 8:21:00 PM
Love it from my Irish side :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 7:28:00 PM
You got me to chuckle! A green bottle of ale would taste really good right now!
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Date: 3/20/2017 6:38:00 PM
Hi Terry Just dropping by to see how you are. Empty to the bone, those bottles i'm sure. May you be in heaven an hour before the devil knows your dead. As always, I run very deep. Xo
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:17:00 AM
I hope he doesn't drink it, but you know what they say about desperate times! A clever limerick, Terry...sending a hug and shamrock for good luck! Rhonda
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:32:00 PM
Awesome Terry
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Date: 3/15/2017 8:58:00 AM
nice one, terry! love your rhymes...
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