The Luck of the Irish

A leprechaun looking for gold
'neath the shimmering shamrocks of olde
      (with the luck of a Gael)
      found ten bottles of ale
somewhat green as if covered with mould.

3/15/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Interesting topic. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in this one. Enjoyed reading your work this morning. Sara
Kelly Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 7:03 AM
"That poor Leprechaun dressed-up in green : Had happened on a vacant sheebeen : Where the patrons can't smoke: So, they all took to Coke: They're so high that they cannot be seen: - You have an excellent ability to rhyme , á cára , Well done with your funnies also. Seán .
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Hello Terry O'Leary, I am thinking that the Irish had bad luck. It must be the luck of the Irish. have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:05 PM
Very good. Obviously not Kiwi ale. That always goes straight down the hatch and guaranteed mould free. Regards David in NZ
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Sounds like a recipe for "Golder's Green," if you're familiar with that section of London, England! Nice limerick! ~ Gershon
DiMino Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Just the way Leprechauns like it. Love it! Great write!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:34 AM
So many trinkets in this beauty!
Fields Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 1:36 PM
as if i could see the leprechaun - in his green all about the hills
Beaufort Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 5:33 PM
You got me laughing with this one! So, we know that some mold can make us sick, but when it's green it has to be good.
Martin Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Not sure luck was involved! Great Limerick Terry and congratulations on your win! :-)
Bose Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Now I know what's at the end of the rainbow! Worth the trek ... Nice job, enjoyed it, Dave
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Great job, Terry. And are you Irish? Sure seems like it by your last name!!
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:36 AM
It sure was his lucky day Terry! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Congrats on your win, Terry.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Not a bad day's find ;) Congrats, Terry! I am only an honorary Irishman through my kids.
Duncan Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Love it from my Irish side :)
Beaufort Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 7:28 PM
You got me to chuckle! A green bottle of ale would taste really good right now!
Collins Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Hi Terry Just dropping by to see how you are. Empty to the bone, those bottles i'm sure. May you be in heaven an hour before the devil knows your dead. As always, I run very deep. Xo
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:17 AM
I hope he doesn't drink it, but you know what they say about desperate times! A clever limerick, Terry...sending a hug and shamrock for good luck! Rhonda
Smith Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Awesome Terry
Bauer Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 8:58 AM
nice one, terry! love your rhymes...
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