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The Luck of the Irish

A leprechaun looking for gold 'neath the shimmering shamrocks of olde (with the luck of a Gael) found ten bottles of ale somewhat green as if covered with mould. 3/15/2017

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2020 4:52:00 AM

Interesting topic. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in this one. Enjoyed reading your work this morning. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/12/2020 7:03:00 AM

"That poor Leprechaun dressed-up in green : Had happened on a vacant sheebeen : Where the patrons can't smoke: So, they all took to Coke: They're so high that they cannot be seen: - You have an excellent ability to rhyme , á cára , Well done with your funnies also. Seán .

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/24/2019 2:46:00 PM

Hello Terry O'Leary, I am thinking that the Irish had bad luck. It must be the luck of the Irish. have a nice day my friend.

David Smith

Date: 3/18/2019 6:05:00 PM

Very good. Obviously not Kiwi ale. That always goes straight down the hatch and guaranteed mould free. Regards David in NZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/26/2018 10:53:00 AM

Sounds like a recipe for "Golder's Green," if you're familiar with that section of London, England! Nice limerick! ~ Gershon

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/1/2018 4:46:00 PM

Just the way Leprechauns like it. Love it! Great write!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2017 10:34:00 AM

So many trinkets in this beauty!

Verlecia Fields

Date: 4/24/2017 1:36:00 PM

as if i could see the leprechaun - in his green all about the hills

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/16/2017 5:33:00 PM

You got me laughing with this one! So, we know that some mold can make us sick, but when it's green it has to be good.

Mark Martin

Date: 4/13/2017 11:33:00 AM

Not sure luck was involved! Great Limerick Terry and congratulations on your win! :-)

David Bose

Date: 4/10/2017 7:32:00 AM

Now I know what's at the end of the rainbow! Worth the trek ... Nice job, enjoyed it, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2017 8:19:00 PM

Great job, Terry. And are you Irish? Sure seems like it by your last name!!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2017 7:36:00 AM

It sure was his lucky day Terry! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/7/2017 6:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Terry.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/7/2017 6:29:00 AM

Not a bad day's find ;) Congrats, Terry! I am only an honorary Irishman through my kids.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/26/2017 8:21:00 PM

Love it from my Irish side :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/20/2017 7:28:00 PM

You got me to chuckle! A green bottle of ale would taste really good right now!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/20/2017 6:38:00 PM

Hi Terry Just dropping by to see how you are. Empty to the bone, those bottles i'm sure. May you be in heaven an hour before the devil knows your dead. As always, I run very deep. Xo

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2017 12:17:00 AM

I hope he doesn't drink it, but you know what they say about desperate times! A clever limerick, Terry...sending a hug and shamrock for good luck! Rhonda

Tim Smith

Date: 3/15/2017 12:32:00 PM

Awesome Terry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/15/2017 8:58:00 AM

nice one, terry! love your rhymes...