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"The Loving Flow"
The Flow in Swell of Surrender drowns control Out to Sea, now Tide of Tomorrow pulls you in further Fingers like seaweed warm tentacles encircle ankles lips kissed salt sweet the sea is tasted Submerged between and through The Journey’s legs wrapped in The Loving Flow Open toward The Great Tomorrow (LadyLabyrinth/2019)
"Living Colour"/The Paper Kites https://youtu.be/jGclgHQltf0 Lyrics: https://genius.com/The-paper-kites-living-colour-lyrics
“There are two ways to reach me: by way of kisses or by way of the imagination. But there is a hierarchy: the kisses alone don't work.” Anaïs Nin, Henry And June "I must be a mermaid, Rango. I have no fear of depths and a great fear of shallow living.” Anaïs Nin

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Date: 11/25/2019 9:05:00 AM
I relate to this. I wrote a piece in my book for my wife titled “ Your Ocean” I am inclined to inhabit deep waters. She has helped me discover Atlantis and many other wonders.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/4/2020 3:21:00 AM
I shall go read it Lamour'eaux. Your wife sounds beautiful and mystic; I am certain you have had to inhabit deep waters, all shades of the most beautiful blues, to dive through her miraculous fathoms, where no doubt, you continue to find treasure bound in boxes bound in treasure boxes, which only you hold the key to open and possess - there you delight in holding all her pearls in the waves generated in each other's discovery. x
Date: 11/5/2019 6:49:00 PM
Lovely, deep and beautiful to read. Ann
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Date: 11/5/2019 7:16:00 PM
multi-layered. a work in progress to be interpreted in many ways. lovely you enjoyed Ann. Oceans can be very deep. x
Date: 11/5/2019 5:47:00 PM
https://youtu.be/6poNaBnGesw
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 5:55:00 PM
"Codes for Coverts Cracking", Chapter 1 (The Paris Affair and Blue Sky)
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Date: 11/5/2019 5:53:00 PM
"J'aime, je tombe, je suis grand Et je rampe après tout Tu seras mienne, tu retiens le temps Tu me connais, me donne le souffle Me fais grandir Tu prétends que tu Tu prétends Que tu souffle en moi..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 5:53:00 PM
"Elle s'appelle Solène Elle s'appelle Solène Elle promène sa gène Ça colle à la peau la gène Comme du Néoprène Un soleil de laine Réchauffe ses veines Elle se répand et t'imprègne La gène de Solène La gène de Solène Est un peu malsaine Une rengaine qui parle d'elle-même Ses idées s'emmêlent Un soleil de laine Réchauffe ses veines Elle se répand et t'imprègne La gène de Solène"
Date: 11/5/2019 5:15:00 PM
A story for Poets with hearts as black as Hell.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 5:16:00 PM
Come as you are. https://youtu.be/ik11_Z3X3mI
Date: 11/5/2019 5:04:00 PM
"THE PARIS AFFAIR AND BLUE SKY". Wicked Game.
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Date: 11/5/2019 5:05:00 PM
https://youtu.be/C8d8b-FYimM
Date: 11/5/2019 4:32:00 PM
Encre. Emile Simone. Lyrics.
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Date: 11/5/2019 4:54:00 PM
Gorgeous
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 4:36:00 PM
https://youtu.be/ek9Qi420SLU
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 4:32:00 PM
Avant de salir même sans le vouloir Ce qui pourrait être un amour sans fard Je t'écris cette lettre à l'encre de mon être Je voulais te dire que rien ne nous sépare Ni ces pantins de cire, ni notre peur du noir Je t'écris cette lettre à l'encre de mon être Je voulais te dire que j'aime tes blessures Que tu me fais sourire qu'avec toi je respire Je t'écris cette lettre à l'encre de mon être Avant de brandir ce trop vieil étendard Avant de devenir des phénomènes de foire Je t'écris cette lettre à l'encre de mon être Caché dans cette trame tu trouveras mon âme
Date: 11/5/2019 3:39:00 PM
Salvatore. "Everything looks better from above My King, like Aqua Marine, Oceans Blue."
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Date: 11/5/2019 4:15:00 PM
https://youtu.be/6kJYxii83UQ
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Date: 11/5/2019 3:39:00 PM
Earthed. Kilby. https://youtu.be/QSJfOLLE0Fk
Date: 11/5/2019 11:01:00 AM
The greater tomorrow, cause right now legs are wrapped in loving flow and its already great...Very creative YOU write...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 3:43:00 PM
Digging the title of the Del Rey song. Thank you Arturo. x
Date: 11/5/2019 6:20:00 AM
https://youtu.be/bdBuDg7mrT8
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 7:17:00 AM
She has dedicated it to the Women of the World. "Ama is a silent film. It tells a story everyone can interpret in their own way, based on their own experience. There is no imposition, only suggestions. I wanted to share my biggest pain in this life with this film. For this is not too crude, I covered it with grace. To make it not too heavy, I plunged it into the water. I dedicate this film to all the women of the world."
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/5/2019 6:53:00 AM
To my tiniest daughter ...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 6:32:00 AM
I LOVE IT. Fabulous. Read the dedication within the video.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/5/2019 6:27:00 AM
Graceful the ballet, but how did you hold your breath so long?
Date: 11/5/2019 5:04:00 AM
and what a great tomorrow it will be...the sea brings out serenity
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Date: 11/5/2019 12:18:00 PM
A lovely song...I could use the Miami heat and beaches right about now
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Date: 11/5/2019 6:16:00 AM
and free we must be :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/5/2019 6:06:00 AM
Are you trying to 'collaborate' with me Special Agt? The category here is 'Free Verse"... "Salvatore" Lana Del Rey https://youtu.be/6kJYxii83UQ
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Date: 11/5/2019 5:19:00 AM
https://youtu.be/_XDL1jvHFsc

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