The Lover's Merry-Go- Round

WE SWING.....
      WE GLIDE...
      WE SLIP AND SLIDE...
      WERE UP AND DOWN....
      WERE SPINNING ROUND AND ROUND..
      ENVELOPING OUR HOPES AND DREAMS...
      TEMPTING US TO BEAR OUR SOUL'S.....
      ENTICING FEAT'S OF ECSTASY...
      OUR HEADS ARE DIZZY....
      WHIRLING...
      SWIRLING...
      LOSING ALL CONTROL...
      EXCITED BY YOUR SENSUAL FEELINGS...
      TOUCHING...
      HOLDING...
      EMBRACING TIGHTLY THAT BEAUTIFUL BODY...
      LOVES ALL CONSUMING...
      INTOXICATING..
      OVERPOWERING....
      DRAWING ALL MY BREATH...
      DRIVEN PASSION'S UNRELENTING...
      INSPIRED BY YOUR EVERY MOMENT....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:57 PM
Very good poem! Thanks for sharing! You really captured the feel an effect of a merry-go-round whilst adding the concept of love in your perspective. Always, Laura
Blencowe Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 7:52 PM
Thank-you Laura have just looked at your work very impressive by my rather simpler style.
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