The Lovely Lemon Water

I am exhausted in sweltering heat
She offers me her fragrance
Two whole glassfuls of lemon water
Laced with honey
Instant hydration of my body
Invigorates me significantly 


In return I offer to moisten her soul
But she is too impermeable to water from my glass
Anchored in absolute self control
Or else I lacked enough dews on the grass

Inside her fridge
Needle like water crystals glisten
Slow crystallization
White pearls of expectation

For a distraction she turns her eyes
To a dense mound of cloud in the sky
Where water waits to be released as rain
A precipitation in making
Waiting for the requisite temperature and pressure
To get down as raindrops
Upon the lovely mountain top

Similar droplets at her window
Nicely held though …


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April 11, 2016
For the Poetry Contest : Elements Part 3 : Water
Hosted by : Brian Davey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dalei Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Very brilliantly penned.Ending is very nice. I like it.......with love.
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Glad you like it. Thank you...
Bhurani Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Your ink flows smoothly like water presenting your honest feelings spontaneously....lovely....gl
Gupta Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Thank you...
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 11:25 AM
very original use of the words in this contest. I enjoyed seeing the imagery in this poem!
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Thank you for noticing the different water Andrea...
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