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The Lovely Lemon Water

I am exhausted in sweltering heat She offers me her fragrance Two whole glassfuls of lemon water Laced with honey Instant hydration of my body Invigorates me significantly In return I offer to moisten her soul But she is too impermeable to water from my glass Anchored in absolute self control Or else I lacked enough dews on the grass Inside her fridge Needle like water crystals glisten Slow crystallization White pearls of expectation For a distraction she turns her eyes To a dense mound of cloud in the sky Where water waits to be released as rain A precipitation in making Waiting for the requisite temperature and pressure To get down as raindrops Upon the lovely mountain top Similar droplets at her window Nicely held though … ______________________________________________ April 11, 2016 For the Poetry Contest : Elements Part 3 : Water Hosted by : Brian Davey

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Date: 4/13/2016 10:49:00 PM
Very brilliantly penned.Ending is very nice. I like it.......with love.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 10:57:00 PM
Glad you like it. Thank you...
Date: 4/13/2016 5:46:00 AM
Your ink flows smoothly like water presenting your honest feelings spontaneously....lovely....gl
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Date: 4/13/2016 6:33:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 4/11/2016 11:25:00 AM
very original use of the words in this contest. I enjoyed seeing the imagery in this poem!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/11/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for noticing the different water Andrea...

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