The Love Story

Amidst lone stars i write your name Below the tide which stole your breath I seal my promise Close to you soon come to be in unknown place and empty hour Destiny betrayed our dreams,our hope and thoughts ,but not forever To those I love I bid farewell,last heartbeat faints so this soul lives in my beloved Not for the contest ,but thanks Alfred Vassallo for the inspiration through your new contest-abc poem about love
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O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Deep, moving My legs quiver!.... (Makes my toenails twinkle!)
Goswami Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Only you are observing to the beautiful scene with love & respect . I am so much happy...Best wishes from India .
Mcdaid Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 5:37 PM
heartwarming beautiful piece
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 4:38 AM
This is good beyond better!
A   Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:52 PM
your poem is so awesome Charma, and I love the inspiration behind it....xox~ Linda
Neels Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Sad and yet so beautiful Charma, absolutely love this :) hope you are doing good. love Wilma
Scott Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 3:37 PM
NICE POEM YOU MIGHT LIKE MY POEM LOVE XX DAVIDSCOTT
Zerbst Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 2:51 PM
Impressive sad quality here. Magical almost in spite of it. I see a scene that tears my heart, but it is beautiful.
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 6:08 AM
This is a beautiful love story...and sometimes love stories are sad. You've captured that everlasting quality well! Thanks for your visit to my work! :)
Orozco Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:04 PM
Beautiful write, you always know how to put such words in place. Beautiful poem! You are beautiful. - Edward
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:06 AM
hey, come on, Enter it in the contest!!!
Chircop Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 6:06 AM
hey andie the only contest i entered was yours and i got a first place cause you were so kind to me..smikes.Other than that i entered only one wiyhout competition and because it was to honour Carolyn devonshire s poetry..You know me ..i dnt know why .Many says competitions are fun but for now i just write to support the others..hugs dear
De Paz Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 2:14 AM
Nice ABC poetry, hope for you in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 12:34 AM
gosh, you got wonderfully inspired here., charma dear. It is always nice to get a visit from you!!!
Bacha Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Don't you ever bid farewell to me. A beautiful poem. Will write soon. a 7>> love terry xoxo
Chircop Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 2:39 AM
No i won t sweet lady..Just a sad poem but don t worry its fictional..hugs
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 3:55 PM
Always a pleasure to read. Hope all is well with you! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Breath-taking and as beautiful as the writer. So melancholy and classical this sad and beautiful poem.
Rhinem Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Ps., I Need Not To Tell You That 'Your Beauty,' Be A Favourite Poet Of Mine, Precious, Beautiful Tinkerbell!....
Rhinem Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Tinkerbell, Don't Let The Gray Gloom Nor The Hopeless Drama, Steal Your Precious Heart's Enchanting Joy, Rather, Soar Through Fields And Meadows Green, Glittering Stars Whom Call To Thee, Baby Girl, Baby Girl, There's No Place Like Home, So, Come All Ye Faithful, Joyful As Triumphant, Hurry Along Now, Tinkerbell, Hurry Along ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Johnny *
Tacito Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 7:30 AM
Should all moments of "love" be a Romeo & Juliet roller coaster? I ponder...wouldn't it be better to remember "love", the fuel of life, by simply living it while we're still here? As usual, your lines grace the eyes of all...mine included.
Calubiran Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 3:55 AM
What sad destiny. tsk3.
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