The Loser

There was a guy who was a real loser
Only because he was quite a boozer.
He'd drink and drink and drink all day
Then he'd drink the night away.


He could not keep a job because of his habit
Always blaming something else, as he drank about it.
He would talk at the bar as he was a real gab
Couldn't pay for his drinks, so they kept a tab.


After losing a job for the fourth or fifth time
He almost went into a life of crime.
He didn't know how to get out of this hole
And always seemed to be on the dole.


One night on his way to another bar
He heard some singing from a church not far.
The music enticed him for a look see
Imagine his surprise at inside there who'd be.


It was a young girl, maybe nine or ten
He hadn't seen her since he could remember when.
Her angelic face was one of the keys
With her sweet voice...brought him to his knees.


He knew at once he was being shamed
By a power so great, now only he himself could be blamed.
For there was the Lord asking him, "Why,
Did his little girl come to the church and cry?"


The quiet words that a child implored
Heard up in heaven, by the Almighty Lord.
It was that moment when grace grasped him
Shook him awake, to recognize his sin.


After that night he cleaned up his act
For with the Lord he had made a pact.
From now on, sober would he be
And his daughter again, her father would see.


For the Lord had heard the prayers of this little child
Turned to her father, making him timid and mild.
Many years went by as then these two
Once again, into a family grew.


He found a job that he worked for the next twenty years
Thanking God each night, as he fought back the tears.
So, if there is something that you need in your life
Put it in the hands of the Almighty, Who alone can calm your strife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 6:55 AM
This is in line for a great ballad ... wonderful story line too. Keep the faith, my friend. One love
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September 25, 2010 at 7:09 PM
This is such a beautiful inspiring story and poem. I loved reading it tonight. Love Scarlett
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:39 AM
oh, you took a story that I have heard often from familes at our church and how some thing like this turns them around. Great message poem, Daniel. LUv, Andrea
Locksley Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 10:53 AM
There is so much emotion in the story behind this poem, Daniel. You must have a lot of faith to write such a poem about the inspiration for the transition in this man's life. I'm so glad you gave us a happy ending. Too often people like this man never find a way to make positive changes. Very sincere and genuinely moving poem. Take care, Diane
Devonshire Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 7:17 AM
You may have been writing about a fictional person, Daniel, but so many people who feel like "losers" become winners once they find comfort in God's grace. It seems this little girl truly was an angel capable of producing a miracle and turning this man's life around. A beautifully written poem with a terrific message, Daniel. I admire your faith! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Daniel, this poem brought tears to my eyes, how beautifully written it is, and filled with emotion, just wonderful.. and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Great advice given in this flowing poem that is descriptive and expressive..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Knop Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Du hast dies mit Deinen Worten gut eingefangen! Sehr gut geschrieben!...All the best, Gert
Mehta Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 2:38 AM
A nice story and nice characterization of the guy who was loser, Danieal
Roberts Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:52 PM
wonderfully inspireing piece
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