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The Lord's Day

Gentle breeze caressing Sunday by the lake Sweet cherub’s laughter Sunday by the lake Spirit overflowing My senses come awake And, all it took was solitude On Sunday by the lake

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Douglas Ace

Date: 3/18/2019 9:06:00 PM

Hello Donna, it's been a while. a self imposed exile of sorts. it is so good tyo look upon these lines once again. God Bless, Lightwalker

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2009 8:46:00 PM

Lovely lyric poetry Donna and so awe inspiring to the reader... thankxxx for replying to my blog issue on Soup site... others also responded with problems.. could we all send one e mail to management with all our names about the problems? maybe get a faster response.. what do u think? Rhoda was saying how stressful it is sometimes with typing in the call letters and numbers.. as I also felt that way and told Highlander about it... the Soup is great.. needs little fixin'... luv Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2009 7:53:00 PM

Oh Donna I felt this poem so very much.. wonderful lyric to start my Sunday ... enjoy your poetry very much.. inspiring.. thankxxx for commenting on Gentleman James.. I will sing along with u .. for he is a jolly good fellow... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Date: 9/5/2009 9:07:00 PM

What a great way to spend "The Lord's Day"! You have me smiling with this one. I like the peaceful feel of this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Thank you for your kind comment. Enjoy tomorrow--another Lord's day. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/31/2009 3:20:00 PM

Nice Lyric Donna, good job...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2009 2:19:00 PM

Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Donna. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2009 1:39:00 PM

What a beautiful picture your lyric is giving out Donna, dreamy restful Sunday>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2009 12:43:00 PM

We need our space sometimes. I love the way that you expressed it here. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2009 12:11:00 PM

Oh yes, sunday, a day for rest, when one renews one's self within one's self of love. God Bless, Sincerely Moses